Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (e.g., “uh”), and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Also vary vocabulary (use “photograph” or “shoot” and more precise descriptions). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love photographing different views when I go out. For example, I often shoot sunlit cityscapes and moody scenes during the rainy season, because they show very different atmospheres and lighting.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give specific reasons with linking words. Fix grammar (singular/plural, articles) and avoid repetition. Provide one concrete example of an urban view you like.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in urban areas because they offer diverse scenes and convenient viewpoints. For instance, I enjoy watching the skyline from a riverside promenade, since the mix of modern buildings and lights feels energising.

Gợi ý: Be specific and avoid vague generalisations. State a clear preference, give 1–2 distinct reasons with linking words, and include an example comparing home and abroad to show depth. Correct grammar and phrasing.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I know the best spots and the climate suits me. For example, I like watching coastal sunsets at a nearby town, whereas abroad I sometimes struggle with unfamiliar weather and routes.

× 'I always prefer view in urban area because the environment is very peaceful and calm.'

✓ 'I always prefer views in urban areas because the environment is very peaceful and calm.'

'The noun "view" and the countable noun "area" should be plural to match the general meaning of preferring types or places. Use "views" and "urban areas" when speaking generally. Also "prefer" often takes plural nouns when referring to a category.'

× 'So whenever I go in urban area I feel refreshed and I. See many kind of locations where the atmosphere is very good.'

✓ 'So whenever I go to urban areas I feel refreshed and I see many kinds of locations where the atmosphere is very good.'

'Urban area' should be plural and the preposition should be "to" rather than "in" when saying you go somewhere. "Many kind" is incorrect; use "many kinds" (plural) or "many different kinds" to agree in number with "locations".'

× 'I love taking pictures of different views whenever I go for outing so that time I click a lot of pictures of different views like sunny weather, uh rainy season and many more.'

✓ 'I love taking pictures of different views whenever I go out, so at that time I take a lot of pictures of different scenes like sunny weather, the rainy season, and many more.'

'Go for outing' is unnatural; the correct phrase is "go out" or "go on an outing." "Click" is informal in this context; use "take" for photos. Also "so that time" should be "so at that time" or simply ‘‘so then.’' Use articles for "the rainy season." '

× 'I. See many kind of locations where the atmosphere is very good.'

✓ 'I see many kinds of locations where the atmosphere is very good.'

'Many kind' is singular adjective with plural quantifier; it should be "many kinds" to agree in number with "locations." Also remove the stray period after I.'

× 'I always prefer views in my own country because the weather of my country is very good and as well as environment is very peaceful and calm.'

✓ 'I always prefer views in my own country because the weather there is very good and the environment is also very peaceful and calm.'

'Weather of my country' is wordy; use "the weather there." "As well as environment is" is ungrammatical; use "and the environment is also" to join two descriptions. This keeps present simple tense consistent.'

× 'If I talk about urban areas where I feel very enjoyable because of the environment.'

✓ 'If I talk about urban areas, I feel very comfortable/enjoyable because of the environment.'

'Feel very enjoyable' is incorrect because "enjoyable" describes something that causes enjoyment, not a feeling. Use adjectives like "comfortable," "happy," or say "I enjoy them" or "I feel very happy." Also the sentence fragment should be connected to a main clause or rephrased as shown.'