Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words (for example, because, for instance) and avoid repetition. Also correct vocabulary mistakes (e.g. ‘watching people what watching views’ → ‘looking at scenes’).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they give me new perspectives. For example, a simple flower can look very different depending on the angle and lighting, and photographing it helps me notice details I would otherwise miss.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and avoid contradictions and filler words. Begin with a clear position, then support it with one or two coherent reasons using linking words (for example, because, so). Remove irrelevant phrases like ‘watching TV’. Also correct pronunciation/word choice errors (‘urban orderly will’ → ‘urban or rural’).

Ví dụ: I don’t prefer one over the other; I like any view that makes me feel peaceful. For instance, a quiet rural field can be calming, while a city skyline can be inspiring, so I choose based on how the scene makes me feel.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear, structured comparison and fix grammatical mistakes. Start with a direct answer (I enjoy both), then briefly compare specific differences using linking words (for example, whereas, while). Use precise vocabulary (‘cityscapes’ not ‘face cards’) and avoid vague phrases like ‘too beautiful for me’.

Ví dụ: I enjoy views in both my country and abroad. For example, India offers vibrant, historic scenes with crowded markets, whereas Canada’s cityscapes seemed more spacious and modern, so each place has its own unique appeal.

× Yeah, I definitely like watching people what watching views, it gives me a perspective.

✓ Yeah, I definitely like watching people and watching views; it gives me a perspective.

The original sentence uses 'what' incorrectly between two gerund phrases. Use the conjunction 'and' to connect parallel activities. Also replace the comma with a semicolon or separate sentence to clarify the relationship between the two clauses.

× I believe everybody has got a different type of perspective.

✓ I believe everybody has a different perspective.

'Has got' is informal and redundant with 'different type of perspective'. Simplify to 'has a different perspective' for clarity and natural English.

× So just a simple flower I believe can be seen differently from different perspectives.

✓ So even a simple flower, I believe, can be seen differently from different perspectives.

Add commas to set off the parenthetical phrase and add 'even' to convey that a simple object can be perceived in multiple ways. This improves natural flow and clarity.

× So that gives me a newer ex that exposes me to newer ideas or ideologies.

✓ So that gives me new experiences that expose me to new ideas and ideologies.

'Newer ex' is unclear and informal; use 'new experiences'. Use plural 'experiences' to match 'ideas and ideologies' and use 'and' instead of 'or' for natural collocation.

× I wouldn't choose any of it.

✓ I wouldn't choose either of them.

When refusing between two options use 'either of them'. 'Any of it' is unidiomatic here. Match plural 'them' to plural 'areas' implied by the question.

× I believe if the view is good, I like it.

✓ I believe that if the view is good, I will like it.

Use 'that' for clause clarity and 'will like' better reflects a future or general conditional reaction. Alternatively 'I like it' can work as a general statement, but 'will like it' fits the conditional 'if' more naturally.

× I could relate to the view.

✓ I can relate to the view.

Use present tense 'can' to express general ability or habit. 'Could' suggests past or hypothetical; present simple fits the context.

× I I really love taking pictures of it.

✓ I really love taking pictures of it.

Remove the repeated 'I'. The rest is grammatically fine.

× I I sometimes don't take it.

✓ Sometimes I don't take pictures.

Remove duplicate 'I' and clarify 'it' to 'pictures' for specificity. Reorder to natural adverb placement: 'Sometimes I don't...'.

× You don't take the pictures of it.

✓ I don't always take pictures of every view.

The original switches to 'you' which is inconsistent; maintain subject 'I'. Clarify meaning: 'not always' and 'every view' explain occasional choice.

× I just enjoy watching TV.

✓ I just enjoy watching views.

'Watching TV' contradicts earlier context about views. Presume speaker meant 'views'. Adjust to maintain coherence.

× So doesn't matter if it's urban orderly will, if it makes me feel good, peaceful, I I would enjoy that.

✓ So it doesn't matter if it's urban or rural; if it makes me feel peaceful, I would enjoy it.

Fix subject omission ('it doesn't matter'), correct 'orderly' to 'rural' and 'will' to 'or', remove duplicate 'I', and use 'enjoy it' for clarity. Use semicolon to join related clauses.

× Honestly I've only been to 1 country other than my country which was Canada and that was too beautiful for me.

✓ Honestly, I've only been to one country other than my own, which was Canada, and it was very beautiful.

Spell out 'one' in speech; use 'my own' for clarity; replace 'too beautiful for me' (awkward) with 'very beautiful'. Add commas for clarity and natural pauses.

× Even my country is very beautiful but the the face cards or the cityscapes in Canada was quite different from what I see in India.

✓ My country is also very beautiful, but the landscapes and cityscapes in Canada were quite different from what I see in India.

'Face cards' is incorrect — likely 'landscapes'; remove duplicate 'the'; use plural 'were' to agree with plural subject 'landscapes and cityscapes'.

× I enjoyed both of the views.

✓ I enjoyed both views.

'Both of the views' is acceptable but wordy; 'both views' is more natural. Ensure past tense 'enjoyed' matches context — speaker referring to past visits.

× It has got its own flavor.

✓ They each have their own flavor.

Use plural subject 'they' (referring to the two countries' views) and plural verb 'have'. 'Has got' is informal; 'have' is clearer. Use 'each' to indicate both are distinct.