Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và sắp xếp ý rõ ràng hơn. Tránh tiếng lóng và từ thừa (ví dụ: “Firstly”, “is it because”). Nên mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó nêu 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ loại cảnh bạn thích, khi nào bạn chụp, lý do). Sử dụng thì và danh từ đúng (photography → photographer; take photo → take photos). Hạn chế tiếng ngập như “uh”.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy taking pictures of different views. I especially like photographing the city skyline at night because the lights create dramatic reflections and contrasts. I usually go out after sunset when the sky is clear, and I use a tripod to capture long-exposure shots for sharper images.

Gợi ý: Cần diễn đạt rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và sửa lỗi từ vựng. Tránh cấu trúc lặp và sắp xếp sai vị trí từ (ví dụ “our is their”). Bắt đầu bằng câu trực tiếp, dùng từ chính xác như “urban” và “architecture”, và giải thích vì sao cụ thể (ánh sáng, kiến trúc, cảm giác năng động).

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because the city lights and modern architecture create a vibrant atmosphere. For example, at night the illuminated buildings and busy streets make the scene dynamic and interesting to photograph, compared with the quieter feel of rural areas.

Gợi ý: Cần sửa câu để rõ nghĩa; hiện tại câu lủng củng và có cụm không đúng (“every 4 fields”). Nên nói trực tiếp thích chụp trong nước hay nước ngoài, nêu 2 lý do rõ ràng (gần gũi, chi phí, dễ tiếp cận) và kết thúc bằng một ví dụ cụ thể. Hạn chế lặp từ như “scenery”.

Ví dụ: I prefer taking pictures in my own country because the landscapes feel familiar and meaningful to me, and traveling locally is usually cheaper and more convenient. For example, I often visit nearby coastal towns where I can capture both sunrise scenes and local life without long journeys.

× Well, absolutely yes, I am a big fan of capturing beautiful sceneries.

✓ Well, absolutely — I am a big fan of capturing beautiful scenery.

'Scenery' is an uncountable noun in English, so the plural 'sceneries' is incorrect. Use 'scenery' to refer to landscapes in general. Also a dash or comma can improve clarity but is optional.

× Firstly, is it because I am a photography in my hobby?

✓ Firstly, I do photography as a hobby.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and wrong word choice: 'photography' is a noun and 'photographer' is a person. The phrase 'in my hobby' is incorrect. The corrected sentence uses the verb phrase 'do photography' and places 'as a hobby' after it for proper structure.

× Uh, I love to take photo the city skyline at night which on the line.

✓ Uh, I love to take photos of the city skyline at night from the waterfront.

Use the plural 'photos' for countable items and the preposition 'of' after 'take photos of'. 'Which on the line' is unclear; I suggested 'from the waterfront' as a plausible fixed phrase. Ensure the phrase matches the intended meaning; if you meant 'on the skyline' use 'on the skyline' or 'along the skyline'.

× Well I prefer views in city areas because our is their the city with the light of the modern architectures and it's a the symbol for the modern city.

✓ Well, I prefer views in city areas because the city lights and modern architecture are symbols of a modern city.

The original sentence has many incorrect pronouns and articles ('our is their the city') and uses 'architectures' incorrectly; 'architecture' is usually uncountable. I corrected word order and made subject-verb agreement: 'lights and modern architecture are symbols...'. Also removed extra articles.

× Well, I absolutely every 4 fields in my country because I would like to capture beautiful sceneries with the familiar scenery that are connected with me and it is also easier and cheaper to go travel.

✓ Well, I absolutely prefer places in my country because I would like to capture beautiful, familiar scenery that is connected to me, and it is also easier and cheaper to travel there.

The phrase 'every 4 fields' is unclear and incorrect; likely you meant 'places' or 'areas'. 'Scenery' should be uncountable and 'that are connected with me' should be 'that is connected to me' to match the singular uncountable noun. 'Go travel' is unidiomatic; use 'travel there'. I rephrased for natural expression and correct agreement.