Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 整体回答表达了喜好和原因，但存在若干问题：1) 发音和拼写错误（例如“angels”应为“angles/angles”）以及部分用词不准确（“perceive the memory”不自然）。2) 句子过长且有冗余，可更简洁自然地表达。3) 使用连接词时需更恰当（例如使用“so”，“therefore”，“also”）。建议在口语中使用简短清晰的主题句，随后用一到两句具体细节支持，并注意词汇准确性和发音练习。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I like taking photos when I travel with friends because I want to keep a visual record of places I might not visit again. Also, I often shoot the same scene from different angles to capture different moods, and I sometimes post the best shots on WeChat to share them.

Gợi ý: 回答包含观点和对比，但语法和词汇错误较多：1) 语法错误（缺少动词，如“they often unspoiled”应为“they often have unspoiled…”）。2) 用词不当或拼写错误（“clouds, Tropic”不符合语境，应使用例如“noisy, chaotic or crowded”）。3) 句子略显混乱且不够具体，缺少连贯的连接词。建议重构为一到两句主题句加一到两句具体原因，使用准确形容词并练习基本语法结构。

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views. They offer unspoiled nature and peaceful landscapes where I can go hiking and relax. Cities, on the other hand, are often noisy and crowded with bright lights, which makes them feel less calm.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了偏好，但逻辑和语法问题较多：1) 逻辑不清（“cannot share my perspectives when I haven't go to another country” 意义模糊，应明确表述原因）。2) 语法错误（如“haven't go”应为“haven't gone”或“I haven't visited other countries”），重复词（“not not”）。3) 用词不准确（“utility”与语境不符，应使用“unity”或“unity/harmony”）。建议先给出直接答案，再用一两句具体、准确的理由支持，注意时态和单复数一致并避免重复。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country, China. I haven't travelled much abroad, so I'm more familiar with Chinese landscapes and culture. Also, I appreciate how many places in China combine natural scenery with cultural elements, which feels unique and meaningful to me.

× I enjoy taking pictures of different views because when I go out with my friends or visit another country, I want to capture the scenery in case I might not have another chance to see it.

✓ I enjoy taking pictures of different views because when I go out with my friends or visit another country, I want to capture the scenery in case I don't have another chance to see it.

句中“in case I might not have another chance to see it”用法冗余。英語中“in case”後面通常用一般現在或情態動詞（如 will/ would）表示可能性，但不與“might”連用來表達否定的未來可能性。改為“in case I don't have another chance to see it”更自然；也可用“in case I might not”但較少見。建議使用簡單否定現在時表達對未來可能性的擔憂："in case I don't have..."。

× And I'd often photograph the same scene from different angels to perceive the memory and share the beauty from various perspectives, as well as posting them on WeChat Moment.

✓ And I often photograph the same scene from different angles to preserve the memory and share the beauty from various perspectives, as well as post them on WeChat Moments.

句中有幾個問題：1) "I'd often" 應為 "I often" 或者 "I'd often"（would）需上下文支持，這裡表達習慣用現在時，因此用“I often”。2) "angels" 錯拼為「天使」，應為 "angles"（角度）。3) "perceive the memory" 用詞不當，應為 "preserve the memory"（保存記憶）。4) 並列不定式時結構應一致，"as well as posting" 改為 "as well as post" 或將主句動名詞形式統一。最後"WeChat Moment" 常用複數形式 "WeChat Moments"。建議注意動詞形式一致、拼寫和詞彙搭配。

× I prefer views in rural areas because they often unspoiled natural beauty and tranquil landscapes where I can go hiking and relax.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because they often have unspoiled natural beauty and tranquil landscapes where I can go hiking and relax.

原句缺少助動詞或動詞來連接主語和補語，"they often unspoiled" 應為"they often have unspoiled" 或 "they are often unspoiled"。此處使用 "have" 更自然，表示鄉村地區擁有（have）未被破壞的自然美景。建議檢查句子是否缺少主要動詞以保持語法完整。

× In contrast, city views are often dominated by commercial buildings in bright lights, which make me feel clouds, Tropic and less peaceful.

✓ In contrast, city views are often dominated by commercial buildings with bright lights, which make me feel crowded, hectic and less peaceful.

原句有多處詞彙錯誤：1) 應用介詞短語表示“有明亮的燈光”，使用 "with bright lights"。2) "make me feel clouds, Tropic" 為錯誤字詞，推測要表達“感到擁擠、繁忙”，因此改為 "crowded, hectic"（擁擠、忙亂）。3) 注意形容詞使用匹配語境。建議使用合適的形容詞描述城市氛圍。

× For me, I prefer views in my own country, China, First of all, that's because I cannot share my perspectives when I haven't go to another country for visit.

✓ For me, I prefer views in my own country, China. First of all, that's because I cannot share my perspectives when I haven't gone to another country for a visit.

句中有時態和動詞形式錯誤：1) "haven't go" 應為完成時的過去分詞 "haven't gone"（或更自然地用 "haven't been"）。2) "for visit" 應為固定搭配 "for a visit" 或直接用 "visited"。另外句子標點可分為兩句以增強可讀性。建議掌握現在完成時（have/has + 過去分詞）及常見短語搭配。

× However, what I want to say is the beauty in China not not only preserve the natural beauty, but also showing the utility and the harmonious between culture and nature.

✓ However, what I want to say is that the beauty in China not only preserves natural scenery, but also shows the unity and harmony between culture and nature.

原句存在多重結構問題：1) 重複 "not not"，應為 "not only"。2) after "what I want to say is" 應接從句，引入詞 "that" 使結構完整。3) "preserve the natural beauty" 用於描述主語時需使動詞與主語一致，改為第三人稱單數動詞 "preserves" 或改為名詞短語；此處把"beauty"作主語可能不自然，改為 "the beauty in China not only preserves..." 改為更自然的表達："not only preserves natural scenery"。4) "showing the utility and the harmonious" 語法和詞彙錯誤，應為動詞形式一致 "but also shows the unity and harmony"，用名詞 "unity/harmony" 描述文化與自然的關係。建議注意並列連接詞（not only ... but also ...）的平行結構，使用正確的動詞形式，並刪除重複詞。