Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more concise and correct small grammar issues. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason and one brief example. Avoid repetition ("that that's"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel to new places. I take photos because they help me remember details of each place, and I often share my best shots with friends online, which is enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Begin with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give two concise supporting reasons using linking words (e.g., "because" and "so"). Correct small grammar issues ("the countryside", "in my spare time").

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because their scenery helps me relax. For example, in my spare time I go to the countryside to enjoy quiet fields and fresh air, which is a nice contrast to the noisy city.

Gợi ý: Answer more fluently and avoid repetition. Use a clear topic sentence that compares both choices, then give a specific reason or brief example. Fix grammar ("I both" -> "I like both", "I want to travel", "are also"). Use a linking word like "however" or "but" to contrast.

Ví dụ: I like views in both my own country and other countries. For instance, local landscapes feel familiar and culturally meaningful, but when I travel abroad I enjoy seeing different architecture and natural scenery, which broadens my perspective.

× I also like to share the photos with my friends online because that that's a wonderful experience.

✓ I also like to share the photos with my friends online because that's a wonderful experience.

The phrase 'because that that's' repeats words and misuses 'that'. Replace with 'because that's' (because + contraction of 'that is') to show cause. Suggestion: use 'because that's' or 'because it is' to connect reason and result.

× I like to go to countryside when I have a spare time because the city is noisy, the countryside is quiet.

✓ I like to go to the countryside when I have spare time because the city is noisy and the countryside is quiet.

'Countryside' as a specific area requires the definite article 'the'. 'Spare time' is an uncountable noun and does not need 'a'. Also the original sentence had comma splice; join clauses with 'and' to contrast. Suggestion: use 'the countryside' and 'spare time' without 'a', and connect clauses properly.

× I both I like the views of my own country.

✓ I both like the views of my own country and those of other countries.

The original repeats 'I' and uses 'both' incorrectly. Use 'both A and B' structure and replace repeated noun with 'those' to avoid repetition. Suggestion: structure parallel elements after 'both' and use pronouns to refer back clearly.

× I want to have a travel to other countries when I have free time.

✓ I want to travel to other countries when I have free time.

'Have a travel' is incorrect; use the verb 'travel' or the noun phrase 'take a trip'. Use base verb 'travel' after 'want to'. Suggestion: say 'I want to travel' or 'I want to take a trip to other countries'.

× I think the views of other countries is also beautiful and different, but maybe it is different from my own country.

✓ I think the views of other countries are also beautiful and different, but they may be different from those in my own country.

The subject 'the views' is plural, so use plural verb 'are' not 'is'. Also replace vague 'it' with 'they' for plural and use 'those in' to compare views. Suggestion: ensure verb agrees with plural subject and use clear plural pronouns when referring to plural nouns.