Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문장 구조를 더 명확히 하고 자연스러운 연결 표현을 사용하세요. 예를 들어 이유와 결과를 연결할 때 because 대신 so나 therefore 같은 연결어를 적절히 배치하고, 한두 개의 구체적인 예를 덧붙여 답을 풍부하게 만드세요. 또한 문장 수를 2~3문장으로 유지해 간결성을 지키세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different scenes because I tend to forget details easily, so I save photos on my phone to remind myself later. For example, I often take pictures of interesting street art or sunsets so I can look back on them.

Gợi ý: 어휘 선택과 문법을 정확하게 다듬으세요. 'watch' 대신 'see' 또는 'view'를 사용하고, 'raw landscapes'는 어색하므로 'unspoiled countryside'나 'natural landscapes'로 바꾸세요. 문장 간에 연결어를 넣어 이유를 자연스럽게 설명하고, 구체적 경험(예: 최근에 가본 시골 장소)을 하나 추가하면 설득력이 높아집니다.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I live in a busy city and rarely have a chance to see unspoiled countryside. The fresh air and open fields are refreshing, for example, I enjoyed walking along a quiet country lane last summer and felt much more relaxed.

Gợi ý: 의미 전달이 불분명한 표현들과 문법 오류를 고치세요. 'prefer to watch' 대신 'prefer views in'을 사용하고, 문장을 구조화해 이유를 명확히 말하세요. 또한 의미가 모호한 표현('not love. Four in the atmosphere')은 제거하거나 다시 표현하고, 감정을 표현할 때는 구체적인 이유(예: different cultures, unique architecture)를 덧붙이세요. 문장은 최대 3~4개로 유지하세요.

Ví dụ: I prefer the views in other countries because I love discovering new places and cultures. Different countries offer unique landscapes and atmospheres, such as colorful markets or dramatic coastlines, which excite me and make my heart race.

× I enjoy photographing different scenes because my memory isn't that good.

✓ I enjoy photographing different scenes because my memory is not very good.

The contraction isn't is acceptable informal writing, but here clarity is preferred; 'not that good' is informal and vague. Using 'not very good' is more natural. Ensure present simple fits general habit.

× So I save them as photos on my phone.

✓ So I save them as photos on my phone.

Sentence is grammatically correct in present simple to describe a habitual action. No change needed.

× I love to watch raw landscapes because I live in urban areas.

✓ I love looking at natural landscapes because I live in an urban area.

'Love to watch' is not idiomatic for scenery; 'love looking at' or 'love to see' is better. 'Raw landscapes' is odd; 'natural landscapes' is more natural. If the speaker lives in a city, use singular 'an urban area' to refer to their environment.

× I have no opportunity to see natural resources.

✓ I have no opportunity to see natural scenery.

'Natural resources' refers to materials like minerals, not views. The intended meaning is scenery; use 'natural scenery'. The sentence is otherwise fine.

× I love to breathe the fresh air that I can't in urban.

✓ I love to breathe the fresh air that I can't in the city.

Missing verb after 'can't'—should be 'can't in the city' is informal; better 'can't in urban areas' or 'can't in the city.' Also 'urban' is an adjective and cannot stand alone; use noun 'the city' or phrase 'urban areas'.

× I prefer to watch other countries.

✓ I prefer to see places in other countries.

'Prefer to watch other countries' is not idiomatic; we 'visit' or 'see places' in other countries. Use present simple 'prefer' for general preference.

× I am interested in new things and not love.

✓ I am interested in new things and new experiences, not in love.

Original is ungrammatical: 'not love' lacks structure. If meaning is that they prefer new experiences rather than love, say 'not in love.' Clarify intended contrast. Use parallel structure 'interested in X and not in Y.'

× Four in the atmosphere and the views.

✓ I enjoy the atmosphere and the views there.

'Four in the atmosphere' is nonsensical—likely a mispronunciation of 'to do with the atmosphere' or 'for the atmosphere.' Rephrase to convey enjoyment: 'I enjoy the atmosphere and the views there.'

× Those scenery makes me heartbeat.

✓ That scenery makes my heart beat.

'Scenery' is uncountable, so use 'that scenery' or 'those scenes.' 'Makes me heartbeat' is incorrect; correct expression is 'makes my heart beat' or 'makes my heart beat faster.' Use present simple for general reaction.