Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 答えは肯定的で内容も伝わりますが、構造が雑で文法や語彙の誤りが目立ちます。まず最初に簡潔な主題文を作り、その後に1〜2つの具体例（海や山、季節の変化）をつなぎの表現（for example, in spring, etc.）で述べてください。また文法（it changes in it's season → it changes with the seasons など）と動詞の時制・形（often going out and take → I often go out and take）を直しましょう。語数は3〜5文に収め、冗長な表現を避けてください。

Ví dụ: Yes. I love photographing a variety of scenes in Japan. For example, I often take pictures of the ocean and mountains, which look very different in each season. I enjoy capturing those seasonal changes with my camera.

Gợi ý: 意味は伝わりますが語彙の誤用（rivarias, insurance）や文法の問題が多く、論理のつながりも弱いです。まず明確なトピック文（I prefer rural views to urban ones.）を述べ、続けて具体的な理由を2点程度（unique landscape, local products）を簡潔に接続詞（because, and, for example）でつなぎましょう。単語は正しいもの（rural, rural areas, traditional）を使い、1文を長くしすぎないでください。

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas to urban ones because the countryside has unique landscapes and traditional local products. For example, rural regions often feature terraced fields and small fishing villages that are very photogenic.

Gợi ý: 意見は明確ですが比較表現と文法、語順が不自然です。比較は“prefer A to B”を使い、対比を示す場合はHoweverやAlthoughの使い方に注意してください。また“grown for a long and long time by local”は意味不明瞭なので、“shaped by local people over centuries”など具体的で自然な表現に置き換えてください。支持理由は1〜2つに絞り、具体例（temples, rice terraces）を加えると良いです。

Ví dụ: I prefer scenery in my country to that in other countries. Although some foreign landscapes are dramatic and wild, Japanese scenery often reflects centuries of human influence, such as terraced rice fields and ancient temples, which I find very appealing.

× Yes I know, of course I like variety of views in Japan including nature and ocean and mountains and it changes in it's season so I enjoy each landscape and often going out and take pictures with camera.

✓ Yes, of course I like a variety of views in Japan, including nature, the ocean, and the mountains, and they change with the seasons, so I enjoy each landscape and often go out and take pictures with my camera.

Pronoun and article issues: 'I know' is unnecessary and informal here; add commas for clarity. 'variety' needs the indefinite article 'a'. 'ocean' and 'mountains' should be preceded by articles or coordinated with commas. 'it changes in it's season' contains incorrect pronoun/possessive and subject-number: 'it' should be 'they' to match plural 'views', 'it's' is the contraction 'it is' but the possessive is 'its' — correct phrasing is 'they change with the seasons'. Verb forms: 'often going out and take pictures' lacks the correct auxiliary; use 'often go out and take pictures'. Add 'my' before 'camera' to show possession. Suggestions: check subject-number agreement for pronouns, use 'a' with singular count nouns like 'variety', and use correct possessive 'its' vs contraction 'it's'.

× I prefer taking photos of rivarias more than urban areas.

✓ I prefer taking photos of rural areas more than urban areas.

Word choice error: 'rivarias' is not an English word; the intended word is 'rural'. Use 'rural areas' to contrast with 'urban areas'. Also maintain parallel structure: 'taking photos of rural areas rather than urban areas' can be used. Suggestion: choose correct adjective 'rural' and ensure parallel comparison words.'

× Rivaria has insurance area, have unique landscape of its indigenous, its indigenous products and the characteristic terrain.

✓ Rural areas have unique indigenous landscapes, traditional products, and characteristic terrain.

Multiple structural errors: 'Rivaria' misspells 'rural areas'; 'has insurance area' is meaningless—likely a mistranslation; subject-verb agreement: use plural 'areas have'. 'unique landscape of its indigenous' is ungrammatical; better: 'unique indigenous landscapes'. 'its indigenous products' should be 'traditional products' or 'local products'. Combine into a clear list using commas. Suggestion: use correct vocabulary ('rural areas', 'local products') and ensure subject-verb agreement and parallel noun phrases.'

× I love it.

✓ I love them.

Pronoun-number mismatch: 'it' refers ambiguously to 'rural areas' (plural). Use the plural pronoun 'them' to refer back to 'rural areas'. Suggestion: match pronoun number to its antecedent.'

× I prefer the scenery in my country rather than other country.

✓ I prefer the scenery in my country rather than in other countries.

Article and number errors: 'other country' should be plural 'other countries' when speaking generally, or use the article 'another country' for a single unspecified country. Also include 'in' before 'other countries' for parallel structure. Suggestion: use 'another country' for one, or 'other countries' for plural general comparison and include preposition 'in'.

× Although other countries landscape are dynamic and dramatic wilderness, Japanese landscape are grown for a long and long time by local.

✓ Although other countries' landscapes are dynamic and dramatically wild, Japanese landscapes have developed over a long time by local people.

Multiple grammar issues: possessive needed: 'other countries landscape' -> 'other countries' landscapes'. Subject-verb agreement: plural 'landscapes are'. 'dramatic wilderness' is awkward; 'dramatically wild' or 'dramatic' alone is better. 'Japanese landscape are grown' has incorrect verb and passive: landscapes are not 'grown' by people; better: 'have developed over a long time'. 'by local' is incomplete—use 'by local people' or 'by locals'. Suggestion: use possessive apostrophe for 'other countries'', ensure plural forms, choose appropriate verb ('have developed'), and use 'locals' or 'local people' for agents.