Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and directly answer, then give one or two clear supporting details using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Focus on specific reasons (e.g., preserving memories, capturing mood) and use natural vocabulary (e.g., "photography enthusiast" instead of "photo holic"). Keep to 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I’m a photography enthusiast and I enjoy capturing different views because photos preserve memories and emotions. For example, landscape shots can remind me of the atmosphere of a place, and city scenes record how life changes over time.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear preference, then give two specific reasons linked logically. Avoid confusing comparisons and incorrect words (e.g., "greedy"). Use linking phrases like "because" and "however" correctly. Mention concrete features (e.g., open space, nature, quieter atmosphere) and limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they offer open landscapes and natural scenery that are relaxing to photograph. Additionally, rural areas often have unique local life and traditional architecture that tell interesting stories.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and organize supporting details by region with clear, accurate descriptions. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases (e.g., "goat cities"). Use linking words like "for example" or "for instance" and be specific about features you like (mountains, temples, coastline). Keep to 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because India has great regional variety. For example, I love the Himalayan landscapes in the north, the ancient temples and cultural towns in the south, and the coastal scenery in the east, so I can find many different subjects to photograph.

× Well, I am a photo holic person and I love to capture divergent views because it plays an indispensable role in our life and act as a in and act as a long lasting memory for us because the pictures are captured in a different ways which have different memories which are very important form of our life.

✓ Well, I am a photoholic person and I love to capture diverse views because it plays an indispensable role in our lives and acts as a long-lasting memory for us, since pictures are captured in different ways that hold various memories and are a very important part of our lives.

Multiple adjective and adverb choices were incorrect or awkward: 'photo holic' should be the adjective 'photoholic' (compound), 'divergent' is better replaced by 'diverse' for describing types of views, 'long lasting' should be hyphenated as 'long-lasting' when used as a compound adjective, and 'different ways which have different memories' is repetitive and awkward; replace with 'different ways that hold various memories'. Also adjust 'life' to plural 'lives' for general statement and ensure verbs agree ('plays' -> 'acts'). Improve cohesion by using 'since' instead of repeated 'because' and compressing redundant phrases.

× Well I prefer views of rural areas because they have a lot of energy in comparison in comparison to urban areas as they are quite well developed areas because a lot of buildings are developed there.

✓ Well, I prefer views of rural areas because they have a lot of charm compared with urban areas; urban areas are more developed and have many buildings.

The original sentence repeats phrases and misstates relationships. 'They have a lot of energy in comparison in comparison to urban areas' is repetitive. 'Energy' is a poor adjective here; 'charm' or 'character' fits better. Also the clause 'as they are quite well developed areas because a lot of buildings are developed there' is wordy and awkward. Rewrite to make subject-verb agreement clear and concise: 'urban areas are more developed and have many buildings.' This corrects agreement and improves word choice and coherence.

× However, rural areas have their own memory because they have a lot of greedy which I love to.

✓ However, rural areas have their own memories because they have a lot of greenery, which I love.

'Memory' should be plural 'memories' if referring generally. The word 'greedy' is incorrect; likely intended 'greenery' (plants, nature). The clause 'which I love to' is incomplete and needs an object or to be simplified to 'which I love.' Fixing these adjectives/nouns makes the meaning clear.

× Well, I prefer views of my own country because as India is a diverse country and contains every, every kind of nature, uh, in which north has situated with a lot of mountains which I love to visit.

✓ Well, I prefer views of my own country because India is a diverse country and contains many types of natural scenery; the north has many mountains that I love to visit.

Tense and sentence structure are awkward. 'As India is' is unnecessary and 'contains every, every kind of nature' should be 'contains many types of natural scenery.' 'In which north has situated with a lot of mountains' is ungrammatical; correct to 'the north has many mountains.' Use present simple consistently for general statements and ensure relative clauses are correctly formed.

× And South and South is known as the goat cities because a lot of temples are situated there which I prefer to view or in east.

✓ The south is known for its coastal towns and many temples, which I prefer to visit; the east also has interesting sites.

'South and South' is repetitive and unclear. 'Known as the goat cities' makes no sense; likely intended 'coast' or 'coastal' or another word—here 'coastal towns' or 'southern towns' fits depending on intent. 'A lot of temples are situated there which I prefer to view' should be 'many temples, which I prefer to visit.' 'Or in east' is incomplete; clarify as 'the east also has interesting sites.' Fix adjectives and nouns to convey intended meaning and use correct verbs ('visit' instead of 'view').