Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like uh, it can make something beautiful and uh, remember long time.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I like city areas because it have many change for me to. Take up myself.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer wheels in my own country and have many seasons. Uh. And in my new country, by trip I have more comfortably.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更直接和连贯,避免填充词(如“uh”)。先给出主题句确认喜欢拍照,然后用一到两句具体细节支持,例如说明拍风景照让你保存回忆或表达美感。注意语法(时态和代词)和句子完整性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they capture beautiful moments. For example, photos of sunsets help me remember special occasions and the feelings I had at that time.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答应首先直接表明偏好,然后提供清晰的理由与具体例子。避免语法错误(主谓一致、词序)和不完整句子。使用连接词(because, so, for example)使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in urban areas because cities offer a lot of variety. For instance, I enjoy photographing different architectures, busy streets and colorful markets which give me new subjects to explore.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答含糊且有严重语法和词汇错误(如“wheels”疑为误用)。应直接回答问题并提供具体原因和对比,例如提到熟悉感、四季变化或旅行时的舒适度。避免断句和填充词,保持一到两句支持细节并用连接词衔接。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I know the places well and enjoy the variety of four seasons. However, when I travel abroad, I feel comfortable exploring new scenery and learning about different cultures, so I also enjoy photographing views overseas.
× Yes, I like uh, it can make something beautiful and uh, remember long time.
✓ Yes, I like taking pictures; they can make things look beautiful and help me remember for a long time.
问题类型:句子结构错误(ID 26)。原句中混合了主语和从句,使用“it can make”没有明确指代“taking pictures”,且“remember long time”缺少主语与正确的时态/介词短语。建议把意思分成两部分:说明喜欢的动作(taking pictures),然后用复数代词(they)指代照片,使用动词短语“help me remember for a long time”。简洁写法有助于语义清晰。
× I like city areas because it have many change for me to. Take up myself.
✓ I like city areas because they have many opportunities for me to grow and improve myself.
问题类型:主谓一致错误(ID 27)和句子结构错误(ID 26)。原句中“it have”主语与动词不一致,应使用复数主语“they have”。“change”应为“chance(s)或opportunities”,并且“to. Take up myself”结构不正确。建议用“opportunities for me to grow and improve myself”来表达“给我很多机会提升自己”。
× I prefer wheels in my own country and have many seasons. Uh. And in my new country, by trip I have more comfortably.
✓ I prefer views in my own country because it has many seasons. In other countries, I feel more comfortable when I travel.
问题类型:代词使用不当(ID 12)和句子结构错误(ID 26)。原句使用“wheels”显然是拼写或词汇错误,应为“views”。“have many seasons”缺少主语,应使用“it has”或“my country has”。“by trip I have more comfortably”结构不正确,应改为“When I travel, I feel more comfortable”或“In other countries, I feel more comfortable when I travel”。建议检查词汇并使用完整的主谓结构,注意副词(comfortably)应与动词“feel”搭配。