Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because take pictures is my favorite things and I like nature so much.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I like rural areas because all living in the city, so I want to I want to try different things.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer in my country because my country have different wealth in each other in each city and my country has fresh air so I really like it.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更自然、语法正确且简洁。开头应直接回应问题,使用一到两句说明原因或感受,避免语法错误和多余词。可加入具体细节(例如喜欢拍什么景色、用什么设备或拍照的目的)以丰富内容,并使用连接词使句子连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, especially natural landscapes. I often take photos of mountains and rivers with my smartphone to capture peaceful moments and improve my composition skills.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答应更直接并给出明确理由。避免重复(如“I want to I want to”)并用相关连接词解释原因或举例。可说明农村的具体吸引点(空气、安静、风景)并简短比较城市与农村的不同。
Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because they are quieter and have fresher air than cities. For example, I enjoy photographing open fields and traditional villages, which feel very different from crowded urban streets.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 回答需更清晰和准确。修正语法错误(例如‘have’应为‘has’),并用一两句具体说明原因,比如文化熟悉度、景观多样性或便利性。避免模糊表述如“different wealth in each other”。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I know the culture and landscapes well, and there is a lot of regional variety. For instance, one city might have historic architecture while another offers coastal scenery, so I can find many different photo subjects.
× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because take pictures is my favorite things and I like nature so much.
✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because taking pictures is my favorite thing, and I like nature so much.
问题:复数与单数、句子结构和冠词使用不当。 原因与建议:原句中用“take pictures is my favorite things”不符合语法。动词不定式“take”应改为动名词“taking”以与主语搭配;主语“taking pictures”是单一活动,应使用单数“thing”而不是复数“things”;此外,两个并列分句之间需要用逗号和连接词“and”。修改后:"taking pictures is my favorite thing, and I like nature so much." 更自然正确。
× I like rural areas because all living in the city, so I want to I want to try different things.
✓ I like rural areas because I have been living in the city, so I want to try different things.
问题:主谓一致与句子结构错误。 原因与建议:原句“all living in the city”结构不完整,缺少主语和正确时态,导致意思不清。根据上下文,学生想表达“我一直住在城市”,应使用主语“I”并用现在完成进行或现在完成时态表达经历(这里用“I have been living in the city”或“I have lived in the city”都可)。另外有重复“I want to”需删除多余部分。建议:"I have been living in the city, so I want to try different things." 符合语义和语法。
× I prefer in my country because my country have different wealth in each other in each city and my country has fresh air so I really like it.
✓ I prefer my own country because different cities in my country have different levels of wealth, and my country has fresh air, so I really like it.
问题:主谓一致、代词/短语使用不当及措辞不准确。 原因与建议:原句“I prefer in my country”中“prefer”后应直接接宾语(如“my country”或“to do X”),而不是介词“in”。“my country have”主谓不一致,国家(my country)作为单数主语应使用“has”,但这里更自然的表达是强调“不同城市有不同的财富水平”,主语改为“different cities”并与动词“have”一致。“in each other in each city”词序和表达混乱,应改为“different cities in my country have different levels of wealth”。最后并列分句之间添加逗号以改善流畅度。建议句子如上,更符合语法与语义。