Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition ("different views/perspective/points of view"). Also correct small grammar issues (e.g., plural/singular agreement) and keep the answer to no more than 4–5 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, when I photograph a city street I try several angles—wide shots to show the scene and close-ups to capture details—because changing perspective often reveals unexpected patterns. This variety makes photography more creative and interesting for me.

Gợi ý: Avoid irrelevant or odd word choices (e.g., "silly person"). Give a direct topic sentence and support it with clear, specific reasons and examples. Fix small errors ("fluorescent lights" is okay but "shine vibrantly" could be simplified). Use linking words like "because" and "for example." Keep to 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the energy and architecture of cities. For example, city skylines at night with bright lights create a dramatic backdrop for photography, and the constant activity provides candid moments to capture. Because of this variety, I find urban scenes more inspiring than quiet rural landscapes.

Gợi ý: Be more coherent and correct grammar. Start with a clear statement, then give specific reasons without repetition. Avoid awkward phrases ("Use in my own country", "everyone is closely in my"). Explain what aspects of familiar views you like (landscapes, culture, language) and use linking words like "because" or "for instance." Limit to 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because they feel familiar and comfortable. For instance, local landscapes and architecture evoke memories and I understand the culture and language, which makes it easier to take meaningful photos. Because of that emotional connection, I usually choose domestic locations when I go out to shoot.

× I do enjoy the act of taking pictures from different views.

✓ I do enjoy taking pictures from different viewpoints.

'Taking pictures from different views' is awkward: 'taking' is fine but 'views' as used needs a noun form 'viewpoints' to express perspective. Use the present participle 'taking' directly with 'pictures' and replace 'different views' with 'different viewpoints' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: use 'taking pictures of different viewpoints' or 'taking pictures from different viewpoints' depending on intended meaning.

× That is because photography has always been my hobby and I'm someone that likes to look at different perspective on a specific subject.

✓ That is because photography has always been my hobby and I'm someone who likes to look at different perspectives on a specific subject.

Use 'who' for people rather than 'that'. 'Perspective' should be plural 'perspectives' to match 'different'. Also add 's' to make plural. Suggestion: use 'someone who' and pluralize nouns when 'different' is used.

× I really enjoy trying to see from different points of view.

✓ I really enjoy trying to see things from different points of view.

The verb 'see' usually requires an object in this context. Adding 'things' clarifies what is being seen. The preposition 'from' is correct; the issue is missing object. Suggestion: include an object like 'things' or 'perspectives'.

× I definitely prefer views in urban areas because I'm more of a silly person.

✓ I definitely prefer views in urban areas because I'm more of a city person.

Calling oneself 'silly' contrasts oddly with preferring urban views; likely intended meaning is 'city person' or 'urban person'. 'Silly' is an adjective but contextually incorrect. Suggestion: use 'city person', 'urban person', or 'more of an urban person'.

× I really love the glamorous city skyline as you can see many fluorescent lights that shine vibrantly.

✓ I really love the glamorous city skyline because you can see many fluorescent lights shining brightly.

Replace 'as' with 'because' for clearer causal link. 'That shine vibrantly' is wordy; 'shining brightly' is more natural. Also 'fluorescent lights' typically 'shine brightly' rather than 'vibrantly'. Suggestion: use 'because' and a present participle 'shining brightly'.

× I also enjoy the sounds at of the hustle and bustle.

✓ I also enjoy the sounds of the hustle and bustle.

Remove the extra preposition 'at'. The correct collocation is 'sounds of the hustle and bustle'. Suggestion: use 'sounds of'.

× I definitely prefer views in my own country because I am someone that does not really like to step outside of their comfort zone and prefer to stay with what is familiar.

✓ I definitely prefer views in my own country because I am someone who does not really like to step outside my comfort zone and prefers to stay with what is familiar.

Use 'who' for people instead of 'that'. 'Their' is inconsistent with singular 'someone'—use 'my' to match speaker. Subject-verb agreement: 'someone ... prefers' requires singular verb 'prefers'. Also 'step outside my comfort zone' is idiomatic. Suggestion: keep pronouns consistent and match verb number.

× Use in my own country reminds me of home.

✓ Views in my own country remind me of home.

Original sentence 'Use in my own country' is likely a typo. 'Views' fits context. Ensure subject 'Views' agrees with plural verb 'remind'. Suggestion: correct typos and maintain subject-verb agreement.

× It is something that I am used to, something that gives me comfort since everyone is closely in my.

✓ It is something I am used to, something that gives me comfort since everyone is close to me.

'Closely' is an adverb but here the adjective 'close' is needed. The phrase 'in my' is incomplete; correct form is 'close to me'. Also remove unnecessary 'that' for conciseness. Suggestion: use 'close to me' to express emotional closeness.