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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Yeah, I really like to take a picture of the views because I think the photo is very important to record, like memories. So I really like to memory something. So I often take a picture.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

I prefer to. I prefer the views of urban areas because I really like the city. So the city gives me more active and energetic, so I prefer the urban areas.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

I prefer the views from the other country because in my country I always look at it. I live in here so it's quite boring to me, so I really like to see the views of other countries.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: Make your response more natural and concise: begin with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (use gerunds/nouns), avoid repetition, and add one specific detail with a linking word. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing views because photos help me preserve memories. For example, I often take landscape shots when I travel so I can remember the places I visited. Also, I sometimes print my favourite photos and put them in an album.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid repeating phrases, and use linking words to explain reasons with specific examples. Use correct adjectives and quantifiers (e.g., "more active and energetic" → "more lively and energetic"). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I find cities more lively and energetic. For example, I enjoy photographing busy streets and modern architecture since they offer diverse colours and interesting contrasts.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 66.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and a concise reason, then add a specific supporting detail or example. Avoid vague phrases like "I always look at it"; instead explain why local scenes feel familiar. Keep sentences grammatically correct and varied.

Ví dụ: I prefer views from other countries because foreign scenery feels fresh and different. For instance, when I travel abroad I enjoy photographing unique landscapes and architecture that I don't see at home, which makes my photo collection more interesting.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× I really like to take a picture of the views because I think the photo is very important to record, like memories.

I really like taking pictures of views because I think photos are very important for recording memories.

Use of verb + -ing after 'like': when expressing preferences, 'like' can be followed by a gerund (taking) rather than an infinitive with 'to' (to take) for general habits. Also plural forms: 'pictures' and 'photos' are more natural for general statements. Use 'for recording memories' to show purpose and remove the awkward 'like memories.'

Incorrect use of verbs/Verb in the present participle form

× So I really like to memory something.

So I really like to remember things.

'Memory' is a noun, not a verb. The correct verb is 'remember.' Use 'things' (or 'memories') as the object. 'I like to remember things' or 'I like to keep memories' are correct alternatives.

Verb + -ing form

× So I often take a picture.

So I often take pictures.

Use plural 'pictures' for habitual actions and more natural phrasing. The singular 'a picture' is possible but in this context 'pictures' fits the general habit better.

Sentence structure errors

× I prefer to. I prefer the views of urban areas because I really like the city.

I prefer the views of urban areas because I really like the city.

The fragment 'I prefer to.' is incomplete and unnecessary. Remove it to make a single clear sentence. This fixes sentence structure errors and redundancy.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× So the city gives me more active and energetic, so I prefer the urban areas.

The city makes me feel more active and energetic, so I prefer urban areas.

'Gives me more active and energetic' is ungrammatical because adjectives need a verb like 'make' plus 'feel' when describing emotions or states. Also remove the extra definite article before 'urban areas' and avoid repeating 'so.'

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prefer the views from the other country because in my country I always look at it.

I prefer the views of other countries because in my country I always see the same things.

'From the other country' is awkward; 'of other countries' is more natural when speaking generally. 'Look at it' is awkward for experiences of scenery; 'see the same things' or 'see them often' is clearer. Also plural 'countries' fits general preference.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I live in here so it's quite boring to me, so I really like to see the views of other countries.

I live here, so it feels quite boring to me, and I really like seeing the views of other countries.

Do not use 'in here'; use 'here.' 'It's quite boring to me' is grammatical but 'it feels quite boring to me' is more natural. Use gerund 'seeing' after 'like' when describing a preference. Replace the repeated 'so' with 'and' for smoother connection.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BoringTedious
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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