Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition (“also” twice), correct odd phrases (“candy designs of peoples” unclear), and use specific examples. Use one or two linking words to add coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different scenes, especially wildlife and candid street moments, because they help me capture authentic emotions. For example, I often photograph birds at sunrise or people chatting in markets, then I print a few favourites and share others on social media to get feedback.

Gợi ý: Good structure and clear reasons. To improve further, add a brief specific example or comparison to make the answer more vivid, and use a linking phrase to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they give me a sense of freedom and help me reconnect with nature. For instance, walking through wide pastures or pine forests with fresh air and few people helps me relax much more than noisy city streets.

Gợi ý: Strong answer: clear topic sentence and specific supporting details. To reach full marks, add a concise linking phrase and a personal touch (why this diversity matters to you) to show engagement.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because Chile’s landscapes are so diverse and dramatic. For example, the Atacama Desert in the north and glaciers in the south offer endless opportunities for nature photography, which I find inspiring and convenient for planning trips at different times of the year.

× Oh yes, I love photographing nature, especially animals and candy designs of peoples going about their everyday lives because that helps me capture authentic and emotional moments.

✓ Oh yes, I love photographing nature, especially animals and candid scenes of people going about their everyday lives, because that helps me capture authentic and emotional moments.

The word 'candy' is incorrect; the intended word is 'candid' (adjective meaning natural or unposed). 'Designs of peoples' is ungrammatical: 'peoples' plural noun usually refers to ethnic groups, but here 'people' (plural of person) is correct. Use 'candid scenes of people' to convey natural everyday moments. Also add a comma before 'because' for clarity.

× I also enjoy printing or sharing these photos on social media so I can relate.

✓ I also enjoy printing or sharing these photos on social media so I can get feedback and connect with others.

The verb 'relate' is misused here; it needs an object or phrase (relate to someone/something). The student likely means to 'relate to others' or 'connect with others' or 'get feedback'. Replacing with 'get feedback and connect with others' clarifies the intended meaning.

× I prefer the views in my own country because Chile has stunning and very diverse landscape.

✓ I prefer the views in my own country because Chile has a stunning and very diverse landscape.

The noun 'landscape' is singular and needs an article. Use the indefinite article 'a' before 'stunning and very diverse landscape'. Alternatively, use plural 'landscapes' without an article. The added article corrects the noun phrase.

× For example, you can find deserts in the north and vast glaciers in the South, which make it an amazing place for travel and nature photography.

✓ For example, you can find deserts in the north and vast glaciers in the south, which make it an amazing place for travel and nature photography.

Compass directions used as general areas are not capitalized in English ('south' not 'South'). Use lowercase 'south' here. Also, 'which make it an amazing place' is acceptable because 'deserts and glaciers' (plural) are the antecedent; no change needed other than capitalization.