Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, this is one of my hobbies.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
Uh, I like urban airs, uh, in my person because when I live in urban umm, all the seas is convenient and I think the building is more beautiful than rural areas.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
A year, I think both of them is is beautiful, but in my opinion, I'd like I'd like other countries such as Japan.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答简短且直接,但可以更自然、更丰富。建议先用一个完整的主题句表明喜好,然后用一到两句具体说明喜欢拍摄哪类景色、拍照的目的或感受,避免只给出事实陈述。注意语音流畅度,减少停顿和重复。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I especially like photographing cityscapes at sunset because the light makes the buildings look dramatic, and I often share my favorite shots on social media.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 句子存在语音犹豫、词汇错误和语法问题(如“urban airs”“all the seas”),表达不够清晰。建议先直接回答偏好(urban或rural),然后用2句具体原因支持,使用连词(because, although, while)使逻辑更连贯,并注意发音和准确词汇(例如“urban areas”“it’s more convenient”)。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in urban areas because city life is more convenient and there are many interesting buildings. For example, I enjoy photographing modern skyscrapers and busy streets, which often have more dynamic compositions than rural scenes.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答表达重复且不够具体。建议先给出总体立场(Both / my country / other countries),然后说明原因并举例,避免重复短语(like I'd like I'd like)。可以提到具体差异(architecture, culture, light)来丰富内容。
Ví dụ: I think both views in my country and abroad can be beautiful, but I especially enjoy photographing scenes in other countries like Japan because the architecture and seasonal colours are quite different from what I see at home.
× I like urban airs, uh, in my person because when I live in urban umm, all the seas is convenient and I think the building is more beautiful than rural areas.
✓ I like urban areas, personally, because when I live in the city everything is convenient and I think the buildings are more beautiful than in rural areas.
错误类型:介词/短语使用不当与词汇选择不准确。 1) "urban airs" 是错误搭配,应为 "urban areas"(城市地区)。 2) "in my person" 用法不对,正确表达为 "personally"(就个人而言)。 3) "when I live in urban" 缺少名词,应为 "when I live in the city" 或 "when I live in urban areas"。 4) "all the seas is convenient" 多处错误:"seas"(海洋)显然不是想表达的词,估计想说 "things" 或指代 "everything";主谓不一致(is -> are)也有问题。改为 "everything is convenient"。 5) "the building is more beautiful" 单复数错误,应为复数 "the buildings are more beautiful",并且与后面比较对象连词位置需改成 "than in rural areas"。 建议:关注固定搭配(urban areas, personally, everything),注意名词单复数和主谓一致,简化句子结构以保持清晰。
× A year, I think both of them is is beautiful, but in my opinion, I'd like I'd like other countries such as Japan.
✓ Actually, I think both are beautiful, but in my opinion I prefer other countries such as Japan.
错误类型:主谓一致和赘词。 1) "A year" 不合上下文,可能想说 "Actually" 或 "In a year",根据语境应为 "Actually"(实际上)。 2) "both of them is is beautiful" 主谓不一致且重复 "is is";"both" 表示复数,应使用动词复数形式 "are",即 "both are beautiful"。 3) "I'd like I'd like" 重复,说话应去掉重复并改为更自然的表达 "I prefer"(我更喜欢)或 "I'd like"。 建议:注意主语为复数时谓语动词用复数形式,避免口语中的重复和填充词,使用更贴切的动词(例如 prefer)。