Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise, correct grammar, and add a clear topic sentence plus one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating phrases like “different landscape or scenery.” Also correct person reference (use “me” instead of “your”) and reduce to no more than 4–5 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes — I enjoy photographing different views. When I travel, I always bring my smartphone to capture natural landscapes and local cultural scenes, such as temple facades or market streets. Because these photos remind me of experiences, they make me feel relaxed and uplifted afterward.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence stating preference (or equal preference), then use linking words (e.g., “however,” “on the other hand”) to compare. Fix sentence fragments and be specific: name a city skyline or a type of mountain scene. Keep to 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I enjoy both urban and rural views, depending on my mood. For example, in cities I like photographing skylines and modern architecture to capture energy, whereas in the countryside I prefer mountains and forests because they convey peace. Overall, I choose the setting that matches how I feel.

Gợi ý: Finish your answer with a clear conclusion and give a specific reason. Start with a direct topic sentence, add one or two concrete supporting details, use linking words (e.g., “however,” “because”), and avoid leaving the sentence incomplete. Mention whether you prefer domestic or international views and why.

Ví dụ: I appreciate views both at home and abroad, because each offers something different. For instance, traveling abroad lets me experience unfamiliar architecture and local customs, whereas my country’s landscapes are more familiar and easier to explore. However, if I had to choose, I would spend more time photographing other countries to learn about diverse cultures.

× Yes, I like to take pictures of different landscape or scenery.

✓ Yes, I like to take pictures of different landscapes or scenery.

The noun 'landscape' should be plural when referring to different kinds or multiple instances. Use 'landscapes' to match 'different' and 'pictures'. Suggestion: use plural nouns after 'different' when referring to more than one example.

× Whenever I travel, I always bring my smartphone with me and take a snapshot of different landscape or cultural scenery.

✓ Whenever I travel, I always bring my smartphone with me and take snapshots of different landscapes or cultural scenes.

'Snapshot' should be plural ('snapshots') to match repeated actions. 'Landscape' should be plural ('landscapes'), and 'cultural scenery' is unnatural; use 'cultural scenes'. Suggestion: match number (singular/plural) between verbs and repeated nouns and choose natural collocations.

× And I think that is really helpful for your soul because it can heal you at the same time.

✓ And I think that is really helpful for the soul because it can heal you at the same time.

The pronoun 'your' is odd in a general statement. Use 'the soul' or 'one's soul' for general statements. Alternatively, use 'you' consistently: 'I think it is really helpful for you because it can heal you.' Suggestion: use general nouns like 'the soul' or 'one's' for general observations, or address the listener directly with consistent pronouns.

× I think I like both. Depends on the mood or depends where I am at.

✓ I think I like both. It depends on my mood or where I am.

The fragments 'Depends on the mood' and 'depends where I am at' lack a subject. Combine into a full sentence with subject 'it' and remove unnecessary 'at'. Suggestion: start dependent clauses with a subject (it) and avoid casual 'at' when unnecessary.

× I like to take a snapshot of urban cities to see the skyline, different types of architectures and on the other hand I also enjoy having pictures of mountains, trees and or.

✓ I like to take snapshots of urban areas to see the skyline and different types of architecture, and on the other hand I also enjoy taking pictures of mountains and trees.

'Urban cities' is redundant; use 'urban areas' or 'cities'. 'Architectures' is incorrect—'architecture' is uncountable. 'Take a snapshot' should be plural for repeated action. The phrase 'and or' is incomplete and unclear. Suggestion: avoid redundant expressions, use uncountable nouns properly (architecture), and complete parallel lists.

× I think I like to witness both. I like to go to different places to see their cultures or different types of sceneries and landscapes. However, if I am going to choose, I like to spend more time in.

✓ I think I like to experience both. I like to go to different places to see their cultures and different types of scenery and landscapes. However, if I had to choose, I would like to spend more time in my own country.

'Witness' is an odd verb for experiencing cultures; 'experience' is better. 'Sceneries' is incorrect—use 'scenery' (uncountable). The final sentence is incomplete: 'if I am going to choose' is awkward and lacks the object after 'in'. Use conditional 'if I had to choose' and complete the thought with a location. Suggestion: use appropriate verbs (experience), correct uncountable nouns, and ensure conditional sentences are complete and coherent.