Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and clearer. Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No + reason), then give one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Avoid repetition and correct grammar (e.g., "take pictures of different views", "keep the memory"). Aim for 2–3 sentences, use precise vocabulary like "capture memories" or "share on social media".

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me capture memories of special moments. For example, when I visited a mountain village last year, I photographed the landscape and later shared the images on social media to remember the trip.

Gợi ý: Give a clear position and then justify it with one specific contrast. Use linking words like "both... and", "however", or "because". Fix grammar ("prefer taking views of", "different places have different characteristics"). Keep to 2–3 sentences and include a brief example or reason.

Ví dụ: I prefer both urban and rural views because they offer contrasting experiences: urban areas have interesting architecture and lively streets, while rural areas offer peaceful natural scenery. For instance, I enjoy photographing city skylines for their energy, but I also like rural fields for their quiet beauty.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and organize ideas: state preference, give a specific reason, then briefly mention the alternative. Improve grammar and clarity (e.g., "Nepal is rich in natural scenery", "many tourists visit Nepal"). Use one linking word like "however" to show contrast and keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because Nepal has abundant natural scenery, such as mountains and valleys, which I love photographing. However, I also enjoy visiting other countries to explore different cultures and landscapes.

× Actually I prefer to taking the views of the urban areas as well as the rural areas because the different places has the different characteristic and they can have the varieties of the things.

✓ Actually I prefer taking views of both urban and rural areas because different places have different characteristics and offer a variety of things.

Incorrect use of 'to taking' — after 'prefer' use the gerund (taking) or the infinitive (to take), but not 'to taking'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'the different places has' should be 'different places have'. 'Characteristic' should be plural 'characteristics'. Use 'both urban and rural areas' for conciseness and 'offer a variety of things' is more natural.

× So we can explore. So both sections in the both parts which are very best.

✓ So we can explore, and both parts are very good.

Awkward structure and redundancy 'both sections in the both parts'. Corrected to 'both parts' and fixed clause structure. 'Very best' is unnatural here; use 'very good' or 'great' depending on meaning.

× Well, I like to take a picture about the different views because if I take the picture at that moment, I can't see the picture later when I remember those things.

✓ Well, I like taking pictures of different views because if I take a picture at that moment, I can look at it later to remember those things.

Prefer gerund 'taking pictures' after 'like' for habitual preference. Use 'pictures of different views' instead of 'a picture about the different views'. 'I can't see the picture later when I remember' is incorrect tense/meaning — use 'I can look at it later to remember' to express future recall.

× So it is going to keep the memory for our futures.

✓ So it will keep the memory for our future.

'It is going to keep the memory' is awkward; 'it will keep the memory' is clearer. 'Our futures' is incorrect here; use singular 'our future' or better 'our memories'. I chose 'our future' to match intent, but 'our memories' could also be used.

× So even I can see it in the social media and explore the varieties of the places which I can keep it as a memory for my everyday life.

✓ I can even see it on social media and explore the variety of places, which I can keep as memories in my everyday life.

Use preposition 'on social media' not 'in the social media'. 'Varieties of the places' is awkward — 'variety of places' is natural. Remove unnecessary 'it' after 'keep' and use plural 'memories' for consistency. Reordered for clarity.

× Actually I prefer to taking the views of the urban areas as well as the rural areas because the different places has the different characteristic and they can have the varieties of the things. So we can explore. So both sections in the both parts which are very best.

✓ Actually I prefer taking views of both urban and rural areas because different places have different characteristics and offer a variety of things, so we can explore them; both parts are great.

Combined earlier fragmented ideas into a single clear sentence. Fixed 'to taking' to 'taking', 'has' to 'have', 'characteristic' to 'characteristics', and 'varieties of the things' to 'a variety of things'. Replaced awkward ending with 'both parts are great' for naturalness.

× Well, actually I like to visit my own country because my country is naturally very rich so they have a lot of mountain and natural things because the many tourists every year come to visit the Nepal.

✓ Well, actually I like visiting my own country because it is naturally very rich; it has a lot of mountains and natural attractions, and many tourists come every year to visit Nepal.

Use 'visiting' after 'like' for habitual preference. Replace 'my country is... so they have' with 'it has' (pronoun agreement). 'A lot of mountain' should be 'a lot of mountains'. 'Natural things' is vague; 'natural attractions' is better. Remove unnecessary 'the' before 'many tourists' and before 'Nepal'.

× So it is the beautiful country. Though I even like to visit the other country because they have the different things so I can explore the.

✓ It is a beautiful country. I would also like to visit other countries because they have different things to explore.

'So it is the beautiful country' should be 'It is a beautiful country' (article correction). 'Though I even like to visit the other country' is awkward—use 'I would also like to visit other countries'. 'They have the different things' -> 'they have different things to explore'. Remove trailing incomplete phrase.