Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is natural and enthusiastic, but it is repetitive and has some grammar errors. To improve: (1) Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question. (2) Avoid repeating the same idea; give one or two specific reasons or an example. (3) Use correct verb forms and articles, and combine short sentences with linking words to make the answer coherent. For example, correct grammar: “I like taking pictures of different views because…” Use linking phrases like “for example” or “so that” to show purpose and add a concrete detail about a memorable photo.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me preserve memories and notice small details. For example, when I visited a coastal town last year, I photographed the sunrise over the harbor so I could remember the colors and the peaceful atmosphere.

Gợi ý: This answer directly addresses the question and gives a personal reason, which is good. To improve: (1) Use slightly more varied vocabulary (e.g., countryside, small towns) and correct articles/plurals (“rural areas” not “rural area”). (2) Add a linking word to connect idea and give a specific detail or short example about what you like in rural views (e.g., scenery, quietness). (3) Keep it within 2–4 sentences to be concise.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because I grew up in the countryside, so rural scenery feels familiar and comforting. For instance, I like winding country roads and rice fields, which remind me of home and feel more peaceful than busy city streets.

Gợi ý: Your answer shows clear preference and personal feeling but has several grammar and clarity issues. To improve: (1) Answer directly with a clear topic sentence. (2) Correct grammar (e.g., “I prefer views in my own country because I rarely travel abroad” and “my country has many islands”). (3) Give one specific example of what you like about your country’s views (e.g., beaches, islands) and use a linking word like “because” or “for example.” Keep sentences concise and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I rarely travel abroad and I love the landscapes at home. For example, my country has many beautiful islands and sandy beaches, and I enjoy visiting each island to experience different coastal views.

× I like taking picture of everything.

✓ I like taking pictures of everything.

The noun 'picture' should be plural after 'taking' because 'everything' implies many items. Use the -ing verb 'taking' correctly with the plural noun 'pictures' to match meaning.

× I love imagining myself in that sometimes so I can memorize it and I can open it if I miss the moment.

✓ I love imagining myself in those moments sometimes so I can remember them and look back if I miss the moment.

Pronouns 'that' and 'it' do not agree with plural sense; 'those moments' fits better. 'Memorize' is more natural as 'remember' for recalling experiences; 'open it' is inappropriate for memories, use 'look back'. Ensure pronoun number agreement and natural verb choice.

× I rarely go to other country and I I feel love the island of my country.

✓ I rarely go to other countries, and I love the islands of my country.

There is an extra duplicated 'I'. 'Other country' should be plural 'other countries' when speaking generally. 'Feel love' is incorrect; use 'love'. 'Island' should be plural 'islands' if there are many. This fixes subject duplication and noun number and verb choice.

× I prefer rural areas because my hometown is in the rural area, so if I go to rural area in another city of another country, I love when it reminds me of my hometown.

✓ I prefer rural areas because my hometown is in a rural area, so if I go to a rural area in another city or country, I love it when it reminds me of my hometown.

Use the article 'a' with 'rural area' when speaking generally. Use 'a rural area' and 'in another city or country' for parallel structure. Add 'it' after 'love' to complete the verb phrase 'love it when'. This corrects article use and preposition/coordination issues.

× It's so many and I love to visit each one of them.

✓ There are so many, and I love to visit each one of them.

The original sentence lacked a verb; begin with 'There are' to state existence of many islands. This fixes number reference and provides correct verb for the plural subject.