Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and structured: begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, like), and give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., landscapes, architecture, wide-angle shots) and limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views and experimenting with angles. For example, I often shoot urban architecture and wide landscapes to capture light and composition, which helps me create more striking images.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct answer, then give specific reasons using linking words. Remove repetition and correct grammar (singular/plural, articles). Keep answers to 2–3 sentences and include concrete details (e.g., types of rural scenes, colours, mood).

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they offer calm, green landscapes that create a peaceful mood. For instance, I like photographing rolling fields and tree-lined paths because the natural light and colours make the images more beautiful.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then give a brief, specific reason with linking words. Avoid vague phrases and fillers; use clearer vocabulary (e.g., local parks, coastal areas, traditional architecture). Limit to 2 sentences and include one concrete example of a favourite local view.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because local parks and coastal areas offer familiar, peaceful scenery. For example, I love photographing the traditional gardens near my town, where the lush greenery and calm ponds create great compositions.

× Yes, I like taking pictures from different views and different angles.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different scenes and from different angles.

The phrase 'taking pictures from different views' is awkward; use 'of' to indicate the object of taking pictures and 'from different angles' is correct. 'Views' is better replaced by 'scenes' for natural collocation. Suggestion: use 'of' when stating what you take pictures of and keep 'from' for angles.

× Like I, uh, for example, I would love to take photos from different landscape areas such as, uh, building scenario or aesthetic photos or something bigger than that.

✓ For example, I would love to take photos of different landscapes, such as buildings, aesthetic scenes, or larger urban vistas.

The original is disfluent and uses incorrect noun phrases ('building scenario') and inconsistent prepositions. Restructure the sentence to remove filler words and use 'of' with 'take photos of'. Use plural nouns for general categories and clearer collocations: 'landscapes', 'buildings', 'aesthetic scenes'.

× I prefer views in rural areas because it gives a peaceful vibe from the scenario itself and rural area has greenery landscape in peaceful environment which makes makes photo much more beautiful than.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because they give a peaceful vibe, and rural areas have green landscapes and a peaceful environment, which make photos much more beautiful.

Several issues: 'views' is plural so verb should be 'give' (subject-verb agreement). 'rural area has' should be plural 'rural areas have' to match general meaning. 'greenery landscape' is ungrammatical; use 'green landscapes'. Remove duplicate 'makes'. 'which make photos much more beautiful' agrees with plural 'landscapes and environment'. Also the sentence was incomplete ('than' left hanging); remove or complete comparison. Suggest splitting into shorter clauses for clarity.

× I prefer views in my own country rather than other country because our country has some peaceful scenario like landscaping area, peaceful environment, greenery umm so this attracts my mind so well.

✓ I prefer views in my own country rather than in other countries because our country has peaceful landscapes, a calm environment, and abundant greenery, which appeals to me.

Use 'in other countries' (preposition 'in' and plural 'countries') to compare locations. 'Peaceful scenario' and 'landscaping area' are awkward; use 'peaceful landscapes' and 'calm environment'. 'Attracts my mind' is unnatural; use 'appeals to me'. Remove filler 'umm' and redundant words. Ensure parallel structure in the list and use relative clause 'which appeals to me'.