Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes I do taking picture with a different different view which made me feel relax and also it captured the landscape and and other things that I have missed before and also for example when I see a photos I can remember that what mood.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
Well, I prefer the rural area phones more because rural area express the laboratory, which is, uh, happiness, happiness for and also it showed a person which really worked hard in the countryside and also.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
Well, I prefer picture in my country because my country is really big enough and also it have many place of interest to visit. You need to almost one month or even more to spend on the countryside or even the landscape in our country.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 答案有表达兴趣和原因,但语法和用词多处不准确,重复和冗长。建议用一句主题句直接回答,然后用1-2句具体细节支持,注意语法(动词形式、冠词、复数)和避免重复。可用连接词(for example, so, because)使表达更连贯。多使用具体词汇(landscape, scenery, memories, moments)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because it helps me relax and capture scenes I might otherwise forget. For example, when I look at a photo of a beach or a mountain, it brings back the mood I felt at that moment and the memories of who I was with.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰,词汇错误(phones, laboratory)和语法问题严重,且句子未完整表达原因。建议先直接给出偏好(urban or rural),然后用2句具体、正确的原因支持,避免错误词汇。可以提到宁静、自然风光、文化或人物故事等具体细节。
Ví dụ: I prefer rural views. Rural areas are quieter and offer natural scenery like fields and old houses, which I find more peaceful. They also show the daily life of people working hard on farms, which makes the photos more meaningful and interesting.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答直接且有内容,但语法和词汇需改进(picture -> pictures, big enough -> large, it have -> it has)。建议开头一句明确偏好,随后用具体细节和例子说明,例如提到著名景点、地理多样性或需要时间旅行的原因,并控制在1-2句支持。
Ví dụ: I prefer taking pictures in my own country. It is very large and has diverse landscapes and many places of interest, so you could easily spend a month exploring different regions and photographing everything from mountains to coastal villages.
× Yes I do taking picture with a different different view which made me feel relax and also it captured the landscape and and other things that I have missed before and also for example when I see a photos I can remember that what mood.
✓ Yes, I do. I take pictures of different views because they make me feel relaxed. They also capture landscapes and other things I had missed before. For example, when I see a photo, I can remember what mood I was in.
句中“do taking”搭配不正确,正确应为“do”用于肯定回答或直接用动词原形(I take)。名词复数形式“picture/photos”要用复数“pictures/photos”。“different different”重复冗余应去掉。形容词/形容词短语位置错误,应该用“make me feel relaxed”。“and and”重复应删去。时态混用问题:描述过去被错过的事应使用过去完成或过去时(这里用过去完成“had missed”更合适);后半句“When I see a photo, I can remember what mood I was in”用现在时描述看到照片时回忆感受。建议:注意动词短语搭配(do + 动词原形或直接使用一般现在时);检查名词单复数;删去重复词;注意时态一致性与连贯性,使用简短句子提高清晰度。
× Well, I prefer the rural area phones more because rural area express the laboratory, which is, uh, happiness, happiness for and also it showed a person which really worked hard in the countryside and also.
✓ Well, I prefer rural areas more because rural areas express a sense of simplicity and happiness. They also show people who really work hard in the countryside.
原句中“the rural area phones”词语错误且无意义,可能是误听或拼写错误;“express the laboratory”用词错误,应为“express a sense of simplicity”或类似表达;“which is, uh, happiness, happiness for”冗长且结构混乱;“showed a person which really worked hard”中关系代词和时态不当,英语中应使用“who”指人,并与一般现在时一致(表达普遍情况)。建议:使用正确名词和介词短语,使用“rural areas”复数表示泛指;用“who”指人,用简洁明确的短语表达情感或特点。
× Well, I prefer picture in my country because my country is really big enough and also it have many place of interest to visit. You need to almost one month or even more to spend on the countryside or even the landscape in our country.
✓ Well, I prefer pictures in my country because my country is really big and has many places of interest to visit. You need almost one month or even more to spend in the countryside or exploring the landscapes in our country.
原句中“prefer picture”名词应为复数“pictures”。“it have”主谓不一致,应为“it has”。“many place”应为复数“many places”。“You need to almost one month”语序与介词使用错误,应为“You need almost one month”或“You need to spend almost one month”并使用介词“in the countryside”表示在乡村中花费时间。建议:注意主谓一致,名词单复数,正确使用时间和地点介词,调整语序使表达自然。