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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

I like taking picture of different views. For example I-18 food I can view taking pictures.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

I like rural areas because these rural areas I can go to work and breath refresh every air.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

I prefer we use my country we because my country. Have a different views for example.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 42.0

Gợi ý: 答案不够自然且有语法与表达错误,内容也不具体。要直接回答问题并用1句主题句表明喜好,然后用1–2句具体的例子或原因来丰富回答,使用连词使句子连贯。例如纠正复数、冠词和句子结构,将“for example”后面的内容改为明确的拍摄场景。练习时注意发音和流畅性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph street food stalls and market scenes because they show local colors and lively activity.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 表达有语法错误且句子冗长不连贯。先给出明确偏好,然后用1–2句具体原因支持。注意动词形式、冠词和词序,如“breathe fresh air”,并用连词连接句子。可以补充具体的农村景色或活动来增加细节。

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because they are quieter and less crowded. For instance, I enjoy walking by green fields and breathing fresh air, which helps me relax after work.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 答案不连贯且有许多语法与用词错误,内容模糊。应先直接回答(own country/other countries),然后给出具体原因或例子。避免重复和不完整句子,注意人称与动词搭配。可说明文化熟悉度或某些特别的景观作为支持。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I am familiar with the culture and scenery. For example, our coastal towns have unique traditional architecture that I love photographing.

Ngữ pháp

1:Singular and plural issue

× I like taking picture of different views.

I like taking pictures of different views.

句子中 picture 應為複數 pictures,因為表達的是拍攝多個不同景色的動作。簡單建議:當名詞表示多個或泛指多種類時使用複數形式(加 -s)。

26:Sentence structure errors

× For example I-18 food I can view taking pictures.

For example, when I go out to eat, I can take pictures of the scenery.

原句結構混亂(I-18 food 不合語法,且 view taking pictures 語序錯誤)。建議先明確時間或情境(e.g. when I go out to eat),動詞用 take pictures of + 受詞 表示拍照。

11:Incorrect use of prepositions

× I like rural areas because these rural areas I can go to work and breath refresh every air.

I like rural areas because there I can go to work and breathe in fresh air.

存在多處介詞和用詞錯誤:原句的 go to work 可接受,但 breath 應為動詞 breathe,refresh every air 不合英語表達,應為 breathe in fresh air(吸入新鮮空氣)。此外在該處用 there 更自然。建議學會基礎動詞形式與固定搭配(breathe in fresh air)。

26:Sentence structure errors

× I prefer we use my country we because my country. Have a different views for example.

I prefer my own country because it has different views, for example...

原句冗長且斷句錯誤:不需要 we use my country we,應用 my own country 表示自己的國家;句子缺主語或動詞(Have a different views 為片語殘缺且 views 為複數時動詞需調整)。建議重組句子:主語 + 動詞 + 補語,並注意所有格(my own)和主謂一致(it has)。

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