Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like to taking pictures of different film. I'm very like taking pictures when I am travel. I think when I take more pictures I can keep the same. So I like to do that when I am traveling.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I prefer rural areas because the rural area made me relax, made me feel feeling I can stay in the rural ever busy schedule. It made me feel happy, feel Unwin.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
Actually I preferred other country view. I really want to go to the other country for travel, so I want to see other many, many real in other country because I never go the ball. So I hope I can go to.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 句子需要更自然與正確的語法;減少重複,說明原因時要具體。注意時態和冠詞(如“taking pictures”不加不定式錯誤),以及用詞選擇(film→scenery/views)。回答控制在最多5句,第一句直接回答問題,後續句子用連接詞補充細節。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I especially like photographing landscapes when I travel because photos help me remember places and feelings. For example, I often take wide shots of mountains and close-ups of local details. This way I can look back and relive my trips.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 語法與用詞需改正,保持簡潔並給出具體原因和比較。避免重複詞語(如“made me feel”反覆),使用連接詞使語意連貫。可加入一兩個具體描寫來支持偏好。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because they are quieter and less crowded than cities. The open fields and fresh air help me relax after a busy week, and I enjoy seeing farms, hills and small villages that feel peaceful.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 46.0Gợi ý: 句子需更正時態與語序(use present tense: prefer),避免含糊不清的片語(如“real”“go the ball”)。說明原因時應具體(比如獨特文化、建築或風景),並用連接詞組織句子。保持句子數量不超過5句且直接回答。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering different cultures and landscapes. For instance, I would like to see famous architecture, try local food and experience new traditions, which I can't find at home.
× Yes, I like to taking pictures of different film.
✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different scenes/films.
原句中 like 后接不定式 to taking 是错误的搭配。动词 like 可接动名词(taking)或不带 to 的不定式(to take),但不能是 to + 动名词。建议用 "I like taking pictures" 或 "I like to take pictures"。此外 "different film" 不太自然,应改为 "different scenes" 或 "different films"(视语境)。
× I'm very like taking pictures when I am travel.
✓ I really like taking pictures when I travel.
原句中用法混乱:"very like" 非英语常用表达,应为 "really like" 或 "like";"when I am travel" 中 travel 应为动词原形,且不需要进行时。正确结构是 "when I travel"。
× I think when I take more pictures I can keep the same.
✓ I think when I take more pictures I can keep the memories.
原句语义不清楚,"keep the same" 不符合英语表达。如果想表达“保留回忆”,应使用 "keep the memories" 或 "preserve memories"。这是句子结构和词汇选择问题。
× So I like to do that when I am traveling.
✓ So I like to do that when I am traveling.
此句语法本身正确(现在进行时用于旅行中),保留不变。只是重复前文内容,无需修改。说明:现在进行时 traveling 在此为非限定性用法,符合语境。
× I prefer rural areas because the rural area made me relax, made me feel feeling I can stay in the rural ever busy schedule.
✓ I prefer rural areas because the countryside makes me relax and feel like I can escape my busy schedule.
原句中 article 使用与词搭配不当:"the rural area" 与 "rural areas" 混用且不自然。应使用 "the countryside" 或 "rural areas"。动词时态也需一致,改为一般现在 "makes"。另外 "feel feeling" 和 "stay in the rural ever busy schedule" 不符合英语表达,需重构为 "feel like I can escape my busy schedule"。
× It made me feel happy, feel Unwin.
✓ It makes me feel happy and relaxed.
原句时态不一致(made -> 更适合现在时 makes),且 "Unwin" 不是英语词汇,推测想表达 "unwind"(放松)。应使用形容词 "relaxed" 或动词短语 "unwind"。同时使用 and 连接更自然。
× Actually I preferred other country view.
✓ Actually I prefer views from other countries.
这里表达常态喜好,应使用一般现在时 prefer 而非过去时 preferred。且 "other country view" 结构不自然,应为 "views from other countries" 或 "scenery in other countries"。
× I really want to go to the other country for travel, so I want to see other many, many real in other country because I never go the ball.
✓ I really want to travel to other countries because I want to see many real places there, since I have never been abroad.
原句中多处冠词使用错误:"the other country" 应为复数 "other countries" 或不加定冠词。"other many, many real" 结构混乱,估计想说 "many real places"。"I never go the ball" 无意义,推测想说 "I have never been abroad"(我从未出国)。同时需把时态改为现在完成时表经历。
× So I hope I can go to.
✓ So I hope I can go there.
原句缺少宾语或地点代词,"go to" 必须接地点或用 "go there"。建议补足为 "go there" 或具体目的地。