Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be careful with grammar (subject-verb agreement and article use) and make your response more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail and an example. Avoid repetition like “going back to something that I went to.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I’m a nostalgic person and like preserving memories. For example, when I revisit a seaside town I photographed before, I compare the new shots with the old ones to remember how it has changed.

Gợi ý: Organize your answer with a clear preference statement and give specific reasons. Correct awkward phrasing (e.g. “my personality fits rural area”) and ensure relevance of details — shopping seems more linked to urban areas, so choose examples that match rural preference like nature, quiet, and local cuisine. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I grew up in the countryside and enjoy the peace and natural scenery. For instance, I like wandering local markets and trying homemade foods in small villages, which feels more authentic than city life.

Gợi ý: Make your answer fluent and grammatical. State your preference clearly, give one or two specific reasons, and avoid vague phrases like “see more other things” or incorrect words such as “eloquent views.” Use linking words (for example, because, for instance) to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering different landscapes and cultures. For example, I love photographing unfamiliar architecture and coastal scenery abroad, which gives me fresh perspectives and inspiration for my photography.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views since I'm more of a nostalgic person and I likes going back to something that I went to and keep a memory of it at least.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views since I'm more of a nostalgic person and I like going back to places I have been to and keeping a memory of them at least.

The verb 'likes' is incorrect because the subject 'I' requires the base form 'like' (third person singular adds -s; first person does not). Also 'something that I went to' is vague and awkward; use 'places I have been to' for clarity and correct present perfect to indicate past experiences relevant to the present. 'Keep a memory of it' should be 'keeping a memory of them' to match plural 'places' and use the -ing form after 'and' when linking actions of the same subject. Suggestions: change 'likes' to 'like', use 'places I have been to' for clarity, and use 'keeping a memory of them' to maintain parallel structure and correct reference.

× I prefer rural areas more than urban areas since I grew up living in a rural area and my personality fits rural area because I love spending my time on shopping, discovering foods.

✓ I prefer rural areas to urban areas since I grew up in a rural area and my personality suits rural life because I love spending my time shopping and discovering foods.

Use 'prefer X to Y' rather than 'prefer X more than Y'. 'Grew up living in' is wordy; 'grew up in' is correct. 'Fits rural area' is incorrect; 'suits rural life' or 'suits living in a rural area' is natural. 'Spending my time on shopping' should be 'spending my time shopping' (no 'on' with 'spend time' + gerund). 'Discovering foods' is acceptable but 'discovering new foods' is clearer. Suggestions: use 'prefer A to B', 'grew up in', 'suits rural life', and 'spending my time shopping'.

× I prefer views in other countries since I want to discover something more or see more other things and I think.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I want to discover more and see other things.

The sentence is wordy and contains awkward phrasing. 'Discover something more' and 'see more other things' are unidiomatic; use 'discover more' and 'see other things'. The trailing 'and I think' is unnecessary and incomplete. Use 'because' rather than 'since' to express personal preference more clearly here. Suggestions: simplify to 'discover more' and 'see other things', remove 'and I think', and use concise conjunctions.

× Other countries has really eloquent views, so I really want to appreciate it also.

✓ Other countries have really impressive views, so I really want to appreciate them as well.

'Other countries' is plural so the verb should be 'have' not 'has' (subject-verb agreement). 'Eloquent views' is an odd collocation; 'impressive views' is more natural. The pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to refer back to plural 'views' or 'countries'. 'Also' at the end is acceptable but 'as well' sounds more natural. Suggestions: use 'have' for plural subjects, replace 'eloquent' with 'impressive', and use 'them' to match plural reference.