Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Well actually, yes, I remember when was the primary school student, I always went for a store with my grandparents along the sea and had a lunch in the coffee. I like to say the views about the sea and we always keen on it.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
Will umm because of I come from town in a small village so where was the children? I like to say the urban waves because I think it is cool but today I prefer to like to say.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
Will I prefer like my own countries because I came on looking at our own cultural views? I think it is. Give me good mood and let me, umm, put me into a history field.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 42.0Gợi ý: 在回答中需要更直接、有条理地回应问题,并使用连贯的句子和适当的词汇。避免语法错误(时态、冠词、介词)和多余的填充词(um, well)。可以用1-2句主题句直接回答,再用1-2句具体细节支持,并使用连接词(for example, because, so)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I often take photos of coastal scenes because they are calming and full of colour. For example, when I was a primary school student I used to visit the beach with my grandparents and photograph the sea and sunset, which always made me feel happy.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答需要先给出明确的立场(urban or rural),然后用一两句理由支持,并补充具体对比或例子。注意词汇准确(urban, rural, village, town)和句子完整,避免重复和含糊不清。
Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the energy and architecture of cities. For instance, cityscapes with tall buildings, busy streets and colourful signs feel exciting to me, unlike quiet villages where there is less to photograph.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 先明确回答自己更喜欢哪个(own country or other countries),然后提供具体原因和例子,说明文化或历史如何影响感受。注意语法(possessive: my country)、用词准确(culture, atmosphere, historical sites)和句子连贯性。避免多余停顿。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I feel more connected to the culture and history. For example, visiting traditional villages and historical sites makes me nostalgic and gives me a deeper appreciation of local customs and architecture.
× Well actually, yes, I remember when was the primary school student, I always went for a store with my grandparents along the sea and had a lunch in the coffee. I like to say the views about the sea and we always keen on it.
✓ Well, actually, yes. I remember when I was a primary school student, I always went to a shop with my grandparents by the sea and had lunch in a café. I liked looking at the sea views and we were always keen on them.
错误类型:过去时使用问题。原句中缺少过去时态标记或动词形式错误(如“when was the primary school student”应为“when I was a primary school student”;“had a lunch”应为“had lunch”;“I like to say the views”意图为过去持续的喜好,应使用过去时“liked”;“we always keen on it”主语与形容词需用过去时和系动词,且代词与复数名词不一致)。建议:在描述过去的经历时,统一使用过去时态(was, went, had, liked, were)。注意可数名词与介词搭配(go to a shop, by the sea, have lunch, café)。代词要与指代对象数一致(sea views -> them)。
× Will umm because of I come from town in a small village so where was the children? I like to say the urban waves because I think it is cool but today I prefer to like to say.
✓ Well, um, because I come from a small village, there were many children around. I like urban views because I think they are cool, but today I prefer rural views.
错误类型:句子结构混乱。原句包含碎片、冗余词(“Will umm because of”)和词序错误(“where was the children?”)。“urban waves”显然是错误词汇,应为“urban views”;“prefer to like to say”重复不必要的动词。建议:先理清主干主语和谓语,去掉填充词,使用正确名词(views)和简洁表达(I prefer X)。若描述一般事实用现在时(come from),若谈过去用过去时(there were)。
× Will I prefer like my own countries because I came on looking at our own cultural views? I think it is. Give me good mood and let me, umm, put me into a history field.
✓ I prefer my own country because I like looking at our cultural sights. I think it gives me a good mood and puts me into a historical atmosphere.
错误类型:现在时态与动词形式使用错误。原句中“Will I prefer like my own countries”时态和助动词使用不当,应直接用现在时“I prefer my own country”。“I came on looking”不合语法,应为“I like looking”或“because I enjoy looking”。后半句缺少主语与正确动词形式,“Give me good mood and let me, umm, put me into a history field.”应改为“It gives me a good mood and puts me into a historical atmosphere.”建议:表达喜好和一般事实用一般现在时,注意主谓一致,并用常见搭配(give someone a good mood / put someone in a historical mood/atmosphere)。