Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more concise and correct grammar, start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect plural forms (e.g., 'this hobby' not 'this hobbies').

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph natural landscapes and wildlife because their colors and shapes inspire my creativity, and occasionally I shoot candid portraits of people to capture everyday life.

Gợi ý: Begin with a direct statement of preference, then give specific reasons with linking words. Correct grammar and collocations: 'urban views' or 'city views', 'rural areas', 'at night' or 'during the night'. Avoid vague phrases and ensure sentences are concise.

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views to rural ones because the city lights at night are more lively and the hustle and bustle create an energetic atmosphere. For instance, I enjoy photographing neon signs and crowded streets that show urban life.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words like 'umm', and use correct grammar (e.g., 'that combine nature and modern life', 'these surroundings make'). Provide one concrete example to support your preference.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because many places combine natural scenery with modern architecture, creating a unique contrast. For example, a coastal city nearby mixes beaches and contemporary skyline, which I find both exciting and beautiful.

× I am a big fan of photography and I really like taking pictures of different views especially nature, animals and also sometimes I do take pictures of people around me and I do find this hobbies interesting because it helps me to become more creative.

✓ I am a big fan of photography and I really like taking pictures of different views, especially of nature and animals. Sometimes I also take pictures of people around me, and I find these hobbies interesting because they help me become more creative.

Errors: incorrect article and plural after 'this' and inconsistent use of 'do' with simple present. 'especially nature, animals' needs 'of' to link 'pictures of'. 'this hobbies' incorrect; 'hobbies' plural requires 'these'. Using 'do take' and 'do find' is unnecessary in affirmative simple present; use 'take' and 'find'. Also pronoun agreement: 'it helps me' should be 'they help me' to match plural 'hobbies'. Suggestions: use 'pictures of', replace 'this' with 'these', remove unnecessary 'do' auxiliaries in positive statements, ensure pronouns agree with plural nouns.

× Personally I think I prefer urban areas view more than rural area because I do find lights during night at the city more lively and I also love the vibe of busy city where people going in.

✓ Personally, I think I prefer views in urban areas more than in rural areas because I find the lights in the city at night more lively, and I also love the vibe of a busy city where people are going about their business.

Errors: 'urban areas view' should be 'views in urban areas' (preposition and word order). 'rural area' should match plural or include article: 'rural areas' or 'the rural area'. 'lights during night at the city' incorrect prepositions and word order; use 'lights in the city at night'. Missing article before 'busy city' and missing verb in 'where people going in' — needs 'are going about' or 'are walking'. Suggestions: use 'in' for locations, place 'at night' after location, include articles where needed, and supply appropriate verb forms.

× I would say I prefer views in my own country because we have a lot of umm scenic views where it combines nature and also the modern lifestyle and I would say this surrounding make the atmosphere more exciting and beautiful.

✓ I would say I prefer views in my own country because we have a lot of scenic views where nature and modern lifestyle combine, and I would say these surroundings make the atmosphere more exciting and beautiful.

Errors: unnecessary filler 'umm' removed. 'a lot of umm scenic views' fine but 'where it combines' uses incorrect pronoun and verb; 'where nature and modern lifestyle combine' is correct. 'this surrounding' should be plural 'these surroundings' to match 'a lot of views', and verb must agree: 'make' (plural) is correct as used in correction. Suggestions: remove filler words, use proper subject for verb 'combine', ensure demonstrative matches number ('these' for plural) and subject-verb agreement.