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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Yes, because different views it's.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

I like rural areas much better because I live in Shanghai. It's a big city, it's lots of people building. I don't like this.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

I like Europe, it's more beautiful, uh, less people there. Uh, it's something I didn't see that before.

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Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答很简短且不完整,语法也有问题(例如“different views it's”不正确)。需要给出一个明确的主题句,然后补充一两个支持细节并使用衔接词使回答更连贯。可以说明为什么喜欢(例如记录回忆、欣赏美景或练习摄影技巧)。注意句子完整与语法正确性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos of different views because it helps me capture memories and notice details I might otherwise miss. For example, when I visit a park I like to photograph the changing light on trees, which improves my photography skills.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了偏好和原因,但句子有重复与语法问题,且用词不够准确(例如“lots of people building”应为“lots of people and tall buildings”)。建议先给出明确的主题句,然后用一两句具体细节支持,使用连接词如“because”或“so”。尽量避免否定式的模糊表达,改为更自然的理由说明。

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views to urban ones because I live in Shanghai and the city is crowded and full of tall buildings. In the countryside I can enjoy open fields and quiet scenery, which feels much more relaxing after a busy week.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答中表达了喜欢欧洲的观点和一些原因,但语言不够流畅且含有语气词“uh”,细节也比较模糊(例如“something I didn't see that before”不清楚)。建议先直接回答问题,然后给出具体比较理由和例子,用衔接词如“because”或“for example”并避免填充词。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries, especially in Europe, because the landscapes and historical architecture are different from what I see at home. For example, I enjoyed the countryside in Italy where small villages and rolling hills felt very peaceful compared with busy Chinese cities.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, because different views it's.

Yes, because there are different views.

问题类型:句子结构错误(ID 26)。原句中“different views it's”结构不完整,“it's”不能作为存在句表述“有不同的景色”。应使用存在结构“there are”来说明“有……”。建议:使用完整的主语和谓语,或用“There is/There are + 名词”来表示存在。

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× I like rural areas much better because I live in Shanghai.

I prefer rural areas because I live in Shanghai.

问题类型:量词/表达搭配不当(ID 14)。原句“I like rural areas much better because I live in Shanghai.”在回答喜好时更自然的表达是“prefer... because...”,而“much better”通常用于比较句,单独用较别的比较结构更清晰。建议:使用“prefer A to B”或“prefer A because...”来表达偏好。

Sentence structure errors

× It's a big city, it's lots of people building.

It's a big city; there are lots of people and many buildings.

问题类型:句子结构错误(ID 26)。原句“it's lots of people building”语法混乱,缺少动词或连词来连接名词,且“building”应复数或与“and”连接。使用存在句“there are”并将“people”和“buildings”分开为并列项更清晰。建议:把人和建筑分别列出并用适当的动词或连词连接。

Sentence structure errors

× I don't like this.

I don't like that.

问题类型:句子结构错误(ID 26)。原句中代词指代不明确,语境中应指代前面提到的“big city / many people / buildings”,更自然用“that”指代之前提到的情况。建议:根据上下文选择恰当的指示代词(this/that)。

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× I like Europe, it's more beautiful, uh, less people there.

I like Europe; it's more beautiful and there are fewer people there.

问题类型:量词/表达搭配不当(ID 14)。“less people”应使用可数名词的比较词“fewer people”。此外句子需要连词连接两个并列分句,用“There are”引出存在情况更自然。建议:可数名词比较用“fewer”,不可数名词用“less”。

Sentence structure errors

× Uh, it's something I didn't see that before.

It's something I haven't seen before.

问题类型:句子结构错误(ID 26)。原句时态错误并且包含多余的“that”。描述过去到现在尚未见过的情况,应使用现在完成时“I haven't seen before”。建议:遇到从过去延续到现在的经历时使用现在完成时,避免多余的指示词“that”放在“before”之前。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BeautifulAttractive
BetterSuperior; More advantageous; To a higher standard
BigLarge; Elder; Important; Ambitious
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
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