Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and reduce repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and give one specific reason or example. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences) and use a linking phrase if adding detail.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because it helps me remember special moments. For example, when I visited the seaside last year, I took photos of the sunset to remember the colours and the atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Clarify your preference and fix grammar and word order. State your main preference first, then give a specific reason using a linking word (for example, because or since). Avoid repeating words.

Ví dụ: I generally prefer urban views because I live in a city and enjoy the lively streets and architecture. For instance, I often take photos of modern buildings and busy markets near my home.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more structured and specific. Begin with a clear statement (e.g. it depends), then explain one or two situations with linking words (for example, when... but when...). Correct verb forms and avoid redundant phrases.

Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. For example, I prefer views in my own country when I want familiar scenery and cultural memories, but I enjoy views in other countries when I travel and want to see new landscapes and architecture.

× I like to taking pictures of different view to make that to make that time more memorable for me.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views to make those times more memorable for me.

The phrase 'like to taking' mixes infinitive and gerund forms; use either 'like to take' or 'like taking'. 'View' and 'time' need plural forms to match context ('different views', 'those times'). Also remove duplicated phrase 'to make that'. Use 'those times' to refer back to multiple occasions. Suggested improvement: choose consistent verb form (gerund or infinitive) and ensure nouns agree in number.

× I mostly prefer view in urban area, rural urban area because I am live in a urban area.

✓ I mostly prefer views in urban areas because I live in an urban area.

Use plural 'views' and 'urban areas' when speaking generally. 'I am live' is incorrect — use simple present 'I live'. Use the article 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound ('an urban area'). Remove the contradictory phrase 'rural urban area' which is unclear; if you meant both, say 'urban and rural areas'. Suggestion: keep consistent plurality and correct verb form 'live', and use 'an' before 'urban'.

× I think it is depend on the situation.

✓ I think it depends on the situation.

After 'it', the verb should be in the third person singular present form 'depends', not the base form 'depend'. Use subject-verb agreement in present simple. Suggestion: use 'depends' when the subject is 'it'.

× Sometime I prefer to view in my own country but sometime also I saw many some but also but sometime I also saw different type of view in other countries.

✓ Sometimes I prefer views in my own country, but sometimes I see different kinds of views in other countries.

Use 'sometimes' (adverb) not 'sometime'. 'Prefer to view' is awkward; say 'prefer views' or 'prefer to see views'. 'I saw' mixes past with general statements; use present simple 'I see' for habitual actions. 'Many some' is incorrect — use 'different kinds of' or 'many'. Use plural 'views' and 'kinds'. Suggestion: use 'sometimes' for frequency, maintain consistent present tense for habits, and use correct quantifiers like 'different kinds of' or 'many'.