Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., “different” repeated) and reduce awkward phrasing like “we can create and we can store.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, when I visit a new place I like to photograph landmarks and landscapes so I can remember how they looked; later I often look back at these pictures to relive those moments.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence, remove repetition, and give specific supporting details with linking words. Explain why preserved structures appeal to you and perhaps contrast briefly with urban views.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they often feature well-preserved historical buildings and natural scenery. For instance, rural villages may have old churches and traditional houses surrounded by fields, which feels more peaceful than busy city streets.

Gợi ý: Organize your answer: state your preference clearly, give specific reasons, and avoid vague or uncertain phrases like “I don't know.” Use correct grammar (e.g., “they cut the trees” → “many trees have been cut down”) and give one concrete example or comparison.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I have noticed that some natural areas at home have been damaged by development. For example, many seaside forests near my town have been cleared for new buildings, so I find the preserved coastlines and parks abroad more attractive.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because first we can create and we can store different memories, different meaning of different places that we go to. And it is also fun to look back those memories that we capture.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because, first, we can create and store memories and meanings of the places we visit. It is also fun to look back at the memories we captured.

Error: redundant 'we can' phrases and awkward noun use. Type: Verb + -ing form and sentence structure. Explanation: 'taking' is fine, but repeating 'we can' is unnecessary and 'different meaning of different places that we go to' is ungrammatical and wordy. Also 'look back those memories' needs preposition 'at' and past participle 'captured' fits. Suggestion: Remove redundant auxiliaries, use plural 'memories and meanings' and replace 'go to' with 'visit'; add 'at' after 'look back' and use 'captured' for the action already completed.

× I prefer views in a rural areas because I can I can see those preserved structures, the historical places and the different different places that the area can offer.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I can see preserved structures, historical places, and the different attractions the area can offer.

Error: incorrect article 'a' before 'rural areas' and repetition 'I can I can' and repeated word 'different'. Type: Article errors and sentence structure. Explanation: 'rural areas' is plural and does not take the singular article 'a'. Remove duplicate phrases and repeated adjectives. Use 'attractions' or 'places' for clarity. Suggestion: Use plural without 'a', remove repetition, and streamline the list with commas.

× I prefer the view in the different in the other country because here in the Philippines they got to cut the trees and the natural landscape of the Philippines and there are different buildings. Now that you can, I don't know.

✓ I prefer the views in other countries because here in the Philippines they have cut down trees and damaged the natural landscape, and there are many different buildings. I'm not sure why.

Errors: incorrect article usage ('the different in the other country'), informal/incorrect verb 'they got to cut', awkward phrasing. Type: Incorrect use of the definite article and verb tense. Explanation: Use 'views in other countries' (no 'the' or 'the other') for general comparison. Use 'have cut down' or 'cut down' to describe past actions affecting the landscape; 'got to cut' is colloquial and incorrect here. 'Now that you can, I don't know.' is unclear; replace with 'I'm not sure why.' Suggestion: Use plural 'other countries' for general preference, use 'have cut down' or simple past 'cut down' for completed actions, and use clear concluding phrase.