Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, reduce hesitations and repetition, correct grammar (e.g., 'I'm a photographer', 'pictures of nature', 'on weekends'), and limit to up to five sentences. Add one specific detail (what you photograph or a favorite location) using a linking word to support your statement.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am a photographer and I love taking pictures of nature. For example, on weekends I often go to the nearby forest to photograph waterfalls and birds, and I sometimes make short videos as well. This helps me relax and improve my photography skills.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence and remove repetition and filler words. Explain one clear reason using a linking word (because/so) and add a specific example of a rural view you like. Keep it within five sentences and use correct grammar (e.g., 'where there are no people', 'I seek peaceful moments').

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because I seek peaceful moments away from crowds. For instance, I enjoy photographing quiet fields at sunrise, when the light and silence create a calm atmosphere that helps me focus.

Gợi ý: Respond directly and clearly: state your preference, correct grammar (e.g., 'I want to travel around my country first' or 'I prefer to see my own country first'), and avoid fillers. Use a linking word to show sequence (then/after that) and give a specific plan or example of a place you'd visit domestically and abroad.

Ví dụ: I prefer to travel around my own country first to enjoy local landscapes and improve my portfolio. After I have photographed the main sites here, I would like to visit other countries, such as Japan or Norway, to capture different scenery and lighting conditions.

× Yeah, basically I'm photographer and I'm into taking a picture of the nature.

✓ Yeah, basically I'm a photographer and I'm into taking pictures of nature.

Missing and incorrect articles: 'photographer' needs the indefinite article 'a' because it is a singular countable noun; 'a picture of the nature' is incorrect—'picture' should be plural if speaking generally ('pictures') and 'nature' is an uncountable noun that does not take 'the' in this context. Suggestion: use 'a photographer' and 'pictures of nature'.

× Uh, usually in the weekend I go to, to, to forest or somewhere like, uh, just to take a pictures and make uh, videos.

✓ Uh, usually on the weekends I go to a forest or somewhere like that, just to take pictures and make videos.

Preposition and article issues with tense/context: use 'on the weekends' (common expression) or 'at the weekend' (British); 'to forest' needs the article 'a forest' for a singular countable noun; 'a pictures' is incorrect because 'pictures' is plural so no 'a'. Maintain present simple for habitual action. Suggestion: 'usually on the weekends I go to a forest ... just to take pictures and make videos.'

× So it's one of my ho hobbies.

✓ So it's one of my hobbies.

Redundant and misspelled word: 'ho hobbies' contains a repeated fragment and a spelling error. The correct expression is 'one of my hobbies.' Suggestion: remove repetition and correct spelling.

× So I prefer rural, rural areas where there is no people just call like, uh, I really want to, I really search for, for, uh, peaceful moment, you know?

✓ So I prefer rural areas where there are no people; I look for peaceful moments, you know?

Several errors: 'there is no people' has subject-verb disagreement and wrong quantifier; 'people' is plural so use 'there are no people.' 'just call like' is meaningless and should be removed. 'I really search for, for, uh, peaceful moment'—use 'look for' or 'search for' once and 'moments' plural. Suggestion: simplify to 'I prefer rural areas where there are no people; I look for peaceful moments.'

× So for me, rural areas is the best for me.

✓ So for me, rural areas are the best.

Subject-verb agreement and redundancy: 'rural areas' is plural so the verb should be 'are' not 'is.' Also 'for me' is repeated; remove redundancy. Suggestion: 'So for me, rural areas are the best.'

× First of all, I want to, to travel my country and, uh, enjoy the views here That when I, I'm done with this, I go to other country to make, uh, other photos, photos or enjoy other views.

✓ First of all, I want to travel around my country and enjoy the views here. When I have seen them all, I'll go to other countries to take other photos or enjoy different views.

Multiple issues: tense and sentence boundaries need correction. 'travel my country' should be 'travel around my country' or 'travel my country' is informal—'travel around' is clearer. Run-on sentence missing punctuation; 'That when I, I'm done with this' is ungrammatical—use 'When I have seen them all' or 'When I'm done with that.' 'I go to other country' needs article/plural: 'other countries.' 'to make, uh, other photos'—use 'take other photos.' Also adjust future intention: use 'I'll' or 'I will' to express future plan. Suggestion: break into two sentences, fix articles, verbs, and tense to match intended meaning.