Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I'd like to take in pictures of different views because I can get a lot of grocery photos.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I like to prefer wheels in city areas.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I'll also go abroad to visit it and uh, I like to grow in my country. Also, I like to interview other countries because there are many famous buildings.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: Be clear and accurate. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid incorrect words (e.g. “grocery” is wrong here), and give 1–2 specific reasons with linking words. Keep it natural and no more than 3–4 short sentences.
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I like capturing landscapes and cityscapes because they show interesting colors and shapes. Also, these photos help me remember places I have visited.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: Use correct vocabulary and answer directly. Say whether you prefer urban or rural views, then give one clear reason and a brief supporting detail with a linking word. Avoid unclear words like “wheels.”
Ví dụ: I prefer views in urban areas. Urban scenes often have striking architecture and lively streets, so I find them more interesting to photograph.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: Give a direct answer (own country or abroad), then explain with specific reasons. Use linking words (however, because) and correct verbs (visit, explore, admire). Keep to 2–3 concise sentences.
Ví dụ: I prefer taking photos both at home and abroad, but if I must choose, I enjoy photographing abroad because there are many famous buildings and different styles. At the same time, I like photographing my own country because I know the best spots and local light conditions.
× Yeah, I'd like to take in pictures of different views because I can get a lot of grocery photos.
✓ Yeah, I'd like to take pictures of different views because I can get a lot of great photos.
The original sentence uses 'take in pictures' which is incorrect because the correct verb phrase is 'take pictures' (verb + direct object). 'Take in' means to absorb or attend, not to photograph. Also 'grocery photos' is an incorrect word choice here; likely intended was 'great photos' or 'good photos.' Suggestion: use 'take pictures' and choose an adjective that fits meaning (for example, 'great' or 'good'). Grammar problem type ID: 26 (Sentence structure errors) and 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs).
× I like to prefer wheels in city areas.
✓ I prefer views in city areas.
'I like to prefer' is redundant and ungrammatical: either 'I like' or 'I prefer' should be used. 'Wheels' is an incorrect word choice for 'views' or 'places'; context shows the question asked about views, so use 'views.' Suggestion: use a single verb of preference ('prefer') and the correct noun 'views.' Grammar problem type ID: 26 (Sentence structure errors) and 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs).
× I'll also go abroad to visit it and uh, I like to grow in my country.
✓ I will also go abroad to visit other countries, and I like to travel in my country.
The clause 'go abroad to visit it' misuses the pronoun 'it'—there is no singular neuter referent; use 'other countries' to match the question. 'I like to grow in my country' is incorrect: 'grow' refers to biological or personal development, not travel. The intended verb is likely 'travel.' Suggestion: replace 'it' with 'other countries' and 'grow' with 'travel' to convey the intended meaning. Grammar problem type ID: 12 (Incorrect use of pronouns) and 26 (Sentence structure errors).
× Also, I like to interview other countries because there are many famous buildings.
✓ Also, I like to visit other countries because there are many famous buildings.
'Interview other countries' is incorrect because 'interview' means to question people; countries cannot be interviewed. The correct verb for going to places is 'visit.' Suggestion: use 'visit other countries' to express traveling to see famous buildings. Grammar problem type ID: 26 (Sentence structure errors) and 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs).