Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more grammatical, concise and use a clear topic sentence. Begin with a direct answer (Yes/No), then add one specific example with a linking word. Reduce hesitation and correct verb forms and articles.

Ví dụ: Not really. I don't usually enjoy taking photos, but when I travel far from home to a place with beautiful scenery, I sometimes take pictures to remember it. For example, last year I photographed the coastline during a trip to the seaside.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear direct answer, then give 2–3 specific reasons using linking words. Fix agreement and use precise vocabulary (e.g., "crowded" instead of "a lot of people"). Avoid repetition like "luxury places and fancy places."

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because cities have tall buildings, lively entertainment venues, and a vibrant street life. For instance, I enjoy city skylines at night since the lights and architecture feel exciting and modern.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and improve grammar and clarity. Use linking words to explain reasons and provide a specific example with correct nouns and adjectives. Replace vague phrases ("history places") with "historic sites" and correct "Asians temple" to "Asian temples."

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it has many historic sites. For example, in the northern province there are several beautiful Asian temples that look especially gorgeous in September when the weather is clear.

× Not quite for me umm I don't really enjoy taking pictures but when we going to somewhere far away from our house and it's has a beautiful views, I kind of enjoy taking pictures there.

✓ Not really for me. I don't enjoy taking pictures, but when we go somewhere far away from our house and it has beautiful views, I kind of enjoy taking pictures there.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'going' should be present tense 'go' to match 'when' clause (present tense usage); unnecessary 'it's has' should be 'it has' (subject-verb); article and plural errors 'a beautiful views' should be 'beautiful views' or 'a beautiful view'. Suggestion: use 'when we go' for habitual or conditional actions, use 'it has' for possession, and choose singular or plural consistently (e.g., 'beautiful views' or 'a beautiful view').

× I prefer in urban areas because there are a lot of tall buildings, entertaining places and it's a lot of people and it seem like luxury places and fancy places.

✓ I prefer urban areas because there are a lot of tall buildings and entertainment venues, and there are a lot of people; it seems like a luxurious and fancy place.

Errors: unnecessary preposition 'in' after 'prefer' — 'prefer' should be followed directly by the object; 'entertaining places' is awkward, better 'entertainment venues'; 'it's a lot of people' is incorrect — use 'there are a lot of people'; subject-verb agreement 'it seem' should be 'it seems'; adjectives order and form — 'luxury places' should be 'luxurious place' or 'luxurious and fancy places'. Suggestion: say 'I prefer urban areas' and use 'there is/there are' for existence, ensure subject-verb agreement and correct adjective forms.

× Uh, I'd rather choose urban than rural.

✓ I'd rather choose urban areas than rural areas.

Errors: missing noun after adjectives 'urban' and 'rural' — repetition of the noun 'areas' clarifies the contrast; tense/modal is acceptable but include parallel nouns. Suggestion: keep parallel structure when comparing two categories: 'urban areas than rural areas.'

× For me, I prefer the views in my country better than any other country because in my country it is a place where history places, especially in senior province, there are a lot of Asians temple and it's so beautiful in September.

✓ For me, I prefer the views in my country to those in other countries because my country has many historical sites, especially in Xieng province; there are a lot of Asian temples, and it is very beautiful in September.

Errors: redundant and incorrect comparative phrasing 'prefer the views in my country better than any other country' — use 'prefer A to B' or 'prefer A to those in B'; pronoun/reference errors 'in my country it is a place where history places' is unclear and ungrammatical; 'senior province' likely mis-named — corrected to 'Xieng province' as placeholder; 'Asians temple' should be 'Asian temples' (adjective form and plural); 'it's so beautiful' better as 'it is very beautiful.' Suggestion: use 'prefer A to B' structure, use clear nouns (historical sites/historical places), use adjective form 'Asian' and plural 'temples', and keep pronoun references consistent.