Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Работайте над грамматикой и естественностью речи: используйте корректные конструкции (например, "I really like taking pictures"), избегайте повторов и заполнителей (uh, um), и не делайте обобщений без обоснования (например, про «девушек» и «парней»). Также сократите ответ до максимум 3–4 предложений и добавьте конкретный пример, чтобы показать владение лексикой и связками.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy taking pictures of different views because it lets me capture moments I can revisit later. For example, last week I photographed a sunset at the lakeside, which helped me remember the colours and peaceful atmosphere. I often take photos when I travel or walk in the park.

Gợi ý: Упражняйтесь в построении чёткой структуры: начинайте с прямого ответа (topic sentence), затем добавьте 1–2 конкретные причины с связующими словами (for example, because, however). Избегайте неверной грамматики ("I can't pictures") и лишних повторах. Делайте предложения короче и понятнее.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because I enjoy open landscapes and natural scenery. However, I also appreciate interesting urban views, especially modern architecture, so it really depends on the place and my mood.

Gợi ý: Исправьте грамматические ошибки и уточняйте мысли: говорите ясно о своём опыте (I have never been abroad) и приводите конкретные примеры мест и причин. Уберите тавтологию (beautiful, prettiest) и используйте связки (because, for example, such as). Сформулируйте 2–3 предложения максимум.

Ví dụ: I have never been abroad, so I prefer the views in my country because I know them well and find them beautiful. For example, our coastal area has long sandy beaches and clear water that I love visiting. In future, I would like to see views in other countries too.

× I very like it taking pictures because I think it's to stop the moment and uh, look at the pictures again.

✓ I really like taking pictures because I think they stop a moment and let you look at the pictures again.

The original has incorrect word order and incorrect use of 'very' with 'like' and awkward infinitive phrase 'it's to stop the moment'. Use 'really like' and the gerund 'taking pictures'. Replace 'it's to stop the moment' with 'they stop a moment' or 'they capture a moment' and change 'look at the pictures again' to 'let you look at the pictures again'. This improves clarity and grammatical structure.

× So I think it's very normal things if if especially for girls, because I know that boys don't do that.

✓ So I think it's a very normal thing, especially for girls, because I know that boys don't do that.

The phrase 'very normal things' misuses plural 'things' with 'it's'. Use singular 'a very normal thing'. Remove duplicate 'if' and place 'especially for girls' in correct position. This fixes number agreement and word order.

× It depends really, but I but I think I prefer views in rural areas, but sometimes I feel not it's not matters for me because I can't pictures, I can't do pictures and the views on the every areas, every places that I just like it so.

✓ It really depends, but I think I prefer views in rural areas. Sometimes it doesn't matter to me because I can't take pictures of every place; I just like the views wherever they are.

The original sentence has repeated phrases, incorrect word order, and wrong verb choice 'can't pictures'. Use 'it really depends' and 'I prefer views in rural areas.' Replace 'it's not matters for me' with 'it doesn't matter to me'. Use correct verb 'take pictures of' and 'every place' not 'every areas'. Split into two sentences for clarity.

× I have never been in other countries, so I think I prefer views in my country because there's a there is a also the beautiful, prettiest views, the very beautiful environment places and I think my I choose my country.

✓ I have never been to other countries, so I prefer the views in my country because there are many beautiful places and a lovely environment, so I choose my country.

Use preposition 'to' with 'been' ('been to other countries'). 'There is a there is a also the beautiful, prettiest views' is ungrammatical: use 'there are many beautiful places' or 'beautiful views'. Remove redundant words and correct agreement 'there are'. 'I choose my country' becomes 'I choose my country' (present simple is fine) or 'I prefer my country.' This corrects preposition use, plurality, and word order.