Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve by giving a brief specific example and using a linking phrase to expand naturally without redundancy. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and vary vocabulary (e.g., use 'memories' or 'scenes').

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because it helps preserve memories. For example, when I visited the coast last year I took pictures of the sunrise to remember the colours and atmosphere. Also, sharing these images with friends helps me relive the experience.

Gợi ý: Good comparison, but improve naturalness and accuracy of vocabulary, and reduce awkward phrasing. Use one clear topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific contrasting details with linking words (e.g., 'on the other hand', 'for example'). Avoid vague words like 'digital' for urban scenes.

Ví dụ: I like both urban and rural views because they offer different atmospheres. Urban scenes are lively and modern with glass buildings and neon lights, while rural landscapes are peaceful and green, with fields and old farmhouses. For example, I photograph city skylines at night but prefer countryside sunrises for softer colours.

Gợi ý: Your idea is fine, but make the answer more natural and specific by stating a clear preference (or explain why you don't choose) and giving a concrete reason or example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for instance' to expand coherently.

Ví dụ: I don't feel the need to choose because both my country and other countries have beautiful scenery. For instance, my country has stunning coastal cliffs, but when I travelled abroad I was amazed by the dramatic mountains in Switzerland. Therefore, I enjoy photographing sights wherever I travel.

× Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views.

✓ Yes, I do like taking take pictures of different views.

The original sentence used the correct meaning but mixed emphatic 'do' with the gerund 'taking' incorrectly here; when you use 'do like' it is more natural to follow with the base verb 'take' rather than the '-ing' form. Use 'I do like to take' or 'I like taking'. Suggestion: say either 'I like taking pictures of different views' or 'I do like to take pictures of different views.'

× It makes the moment unforgettable by capturing it digitally.

✓ It makes the moment unforgettable by capturing it digitally.

No grammatical error requiring change under the provided list. The sentence is acceptable. If you prefer a smoother phrasing: 'It makes moments unforgettable by capturing them digitally.' This uses plural to match general meaning and keeps consistency.

× I think both views are nice to capture, they just have different vibes.

✓ I think both kinds of views are nice to capture; they just have different vibes.

The original contains a comma splice (two independent clauses joined by a comma). Also 'both views' is slightly vague; 'both kinds of views' is clearer. Correct by using a semicolon, conjunction, or splitting into two sentences. Suggestion: use '...nice to capture, and they...' or '...nice to capture; they...'.

× Urban is more digital and newly established, while the rural maintains its authenticity and rustic look with the greens and natures it has.

✓ Urban areas are more modern and newly developed, while rural areas maintain their authenticity and rustic look with the greenery and natural features they have.

Multiple issues: 'Urban' and 'the rural' should be pluralized or followed by 'areas' to be nouns ('Urban areas', 'rural areas'). 'Digital' is not the best adjective for city appearance; 'modern' fits better. 'Newly established' is awkward for cities; 'newly developed' is better. 'Greens and natures' is ungrammatical; use 'greenery and natural features' or 'nature'. Also adjust verbs to match plural subject ('are' and 'maintain'). Suggestion: use plural nouns and appropriate adjectives, and correct noun forms for 'greenery' and 'nature.'

× I believe it is not necessary to choose since our country can also provide great views just like how the other countries can.

✓ I believe it is not necessary to choose, since our country can also provide great views just like other countries can.

The phrase 'just like how the other countries can' is wordy and uses an unnecessary 'how' and definite article 'the'. Use 'just like other countries can' for correct and concise comparison. Also add a comma before 'since' for clarity. Suggestion: '...just like other countries can' or '...as other countries do.'