Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Absolutely, I love taking pictures of different views because I think the world has so many beautiful signs. So I will take pictures or photos to record them and I but to be honest, I like the sky very much.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I prefer views in our areas. I like the light in the evening. I think it's very modern, for example, I think I think the city called Shanghai is very technologic.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I think the different countries have different views, so I think we should have a eye to find the beautiful sign. So I will prefer a beautiful.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答主动但不够连贯与准确。注意:1) 开头应直接用一句主题句明确回应问题;2) 避免冗余或自相矛盾的短语(如“take pictures or photos”,“I but to be honest”);3) 使用更精确的词汇(不要用“signs”描述景色,应使用“scenes”或“views”);4) 控制句子数不超过5句,并用连接词(because, so, and)使逻辑更清晰。练习时可把喜欢的原因和具体例子(如天空的颜色、云彩、日落)加入细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy photographing different views because I think the world offers many beautiful scenes. For example, I often take photos of the sky at sunset since the colours and cloud patterns are always changing. I usually use a tripod to keep the shots steady and try different angles to capture the light.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答含糊且多次重复,词汇使用不准确。注意:1) 明确表态(urban or rural)并给出具体理由;2) 避免重复(如“I think I think”);3) 用更贴切词汇(用“urban”或“city”而不是“our areas”,用“technological”或“high-tech”描述城市);4) 提供一两个具体细节支撑观点(比如夜景灯光、现代建筑、天际线)。
Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the evening city lights and modern architecture. For instance, Shanghai's skyline is impressive with its illuminated skyscrapers and reflections on the river, which make great photos at dusk.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达混乱。注意:1) 直接回答是更喜欢国内、国外还是两者都喜欢;2) 用清晰的原因支持你的选择并提供具体例子;3) 避免词汇错误(“have a eye”应为“have an eye”,“beautiful sign”应为“beautiful scenes”或“beautiful places”);4) 句子要组织好,控制在最多5句内并用连接词衔接。
Ví dụ: I don't have a strong preference — I like beautiful views both at home and abroad because each country offers unique scenery. For example, local landscapes may show familiar cultural details, while travelling abroad lets me capture different architecture and natural features.
× I love taking pictures of different views because I think the world has so many beautiful signs.
✓ I love taking pictures of different views because I think the world has so many beautiful scenes.
原句中用“signs”不符合语境,意思应为“景色”或“风景”,应使用名词“scenes”或“views”。建议多记常用搭配,例如“beautiful scenery/beautiful scenes/beautiful views”。
× So I will take pictures or photos to record them and I but to be honest, I like the sky very much.
✓ So I take photos to record them, and to be honest, I like the sky very much.
原句中有语序和多余连词问题:“and I but to be honest”不符合英语表达。将时态改为一般现在时更符合习惯表达(爱好),并简化为“and to be honest”。建议注意连接词用法,避免重复主语或多余词。
× To be honest, I prefer views in our areas.
✓ To be honest, I prefer views in urban areas.
原句“in our areas”用法不自然且含义不明确。根据上下文考官问城镇还是乡村,应回答“urban areas”或“rural areas”。建议根据语境选择正确的名词短语并避免使用模糊的“our areas”。
× I like the light in the evening. I think it's very modern, for example, I think I think the city called Shanghai is very technologic.
✓ I like the evening lights. I think they're very modern. For example, I think the city of Shanghai is very technologically advanced.
原句中“light in the evening”应用复数“evening lights”更自然;“it's very modern”若指灯光应用复数代词“they're”。“technologic”不是常用形容词,需用“technologically advanced”或“technological”。建议学习常用形容词及副词搭配,如“technologically advanced”。
× To be honest, I think the different countries have different views, so I think we should have a eye to find the beautiful sign.
✓ To be honest, I think different countries have different views, so I think we should have an eye for finding the beautiful scenes.
原句中“the different countries”可简化为“different countries”。“have a eye”冠词和拼写错误,应为“an eye”;“to find the beautiful sign”语义和搭配不当,应为“for finding the beautiful scenes”或“to find beautiful scenery”。建议注意冠词用法以及常见动词短语搭配。
× So I will prefer a beautiful.
✓ So I would prefer a beautiful view.
原句“a beautiful”缺少名词,语法不完整。应补上名词“view”或“scene”,并将时态/语气改为“would prefer”更自然。建议说完整短语并注意动词时态与语气的选择。