Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because different views can make me feel happy and my mom and dad like see the different views photos too.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I prefer urban views because the urban areas views are very modern and it can make me happy. So I will like urban areas views.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer other countries because other countries can bring me different views and can make me feel different.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、句式更简洁,并用连接词把原因和细节衔接起来。可以把情感和具体例子展开,比如说明哪种景色让你高兴或你用照片做什么。注意语法(如“like to see”)和复数形式。建议回答不超过5句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different scenes because they make me feel happy. For example, I love capturing colorful sunsets and city skylines. My parents also enjoy looking at these photos, and we often share them with friends. Taking pictures helps me remember pleasant moments.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答重复且有语法错误,应直接给出观点并用一到两句具体理由支持,使用连接词提升流畅性,并避免冗余。举例说明你喜欢的城市景观类型会更具体。
Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I enjoy modern architecture and lively street scenes. For instance, I like photographing glass skyscrapers and busy plazas, which feel energetic and exciting to me.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 答案表达笼统且重复,应说明为什么外国景色吸引你,给出具体对比和例子,使用连接词使句子更连贯。也可以提到一次具体的旅行见闻以增强说服力。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they offer unique landscapes and cultural scenes I can't see at home. For example, I once visited a coastal town abroad with colorful houses and unfamiliar markets, which felt refreshing and inspiring compared to local scenery.
× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because different views can make me feel happy and my mom and dad like see the different views photos too.
✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because different views can make me feel happy, and my mom and dad also like to see the photos of different views.
句中“my mom and dad like see”中缺少不定式“to”,並且動詞“see”前應使用“to see”或改為“seeing”。另外“the different views photos”語序不自然,應改為“the photos of different views”或“different views photos”。建議:在表示喜好後接動詞時,對於動詞原形前加上不定式“to”,或改寫為動名詞結構;名詞短語中將“photos”作為中心詞,其他詞作修飾放在後或前置為“photos of …”。
× I prefer urban views because the urban areas views are very modern and it can make me happy. So I will like urban areas views.
✓ I prefer urban views because the views in urban areas are very modern and they make me happy. So I like urban views.
原句“the urban areas views are”中主謂不一致且名詞短語語序不正確,應為“the views in urban areas”或“urban area views”。此外,“it can make me happy”中的代詞“it”指代不明且單複數不匹配,應用複數代詞“they”或直接用現在時“make”。“So I will like urban areas views.”使用未來式“will like”不合語境,且語序不當,應為一般現在時“I like urban views”。建議:注意名詞短語的正確語序(如“views in urban areas”),主語是復數時動詞也用復數形式,用現在時表一般喜好。
× I prefer other countries because other countries can bring me different views and can make me feel different.
✓ I prefer other countries because they can offer me different views and can make me feel differently.
句中重複使用“other countries”顯得冗長,可用代詞“they”替代;“bring me different views”語義可接受但更自然用“offer”或“show”;“make me feel different”中“different”是形容詞,用於描述狀態時應改為副詞“differently”或改寫為“make me feel different experiences/feelings”。建議:用代詞避免重複,動詞選擇更自然,使用副詞表示“感覺不同”。