Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid unclear phrases (e.g. “I am used to”) and grammatical errors (tense and article use).

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. For example, I’ve been taking photos since I was a child, and now that I have my own phone I usually photograph new places I visit, especially interesting street scenes or landscapes.

Gợi ý: This answer is clear and well-structured. To improve further, add a linking phrase to connect reasons and include a brief comparison to urban views for contrast. Use slightly more varied vocabulary (e.g. “serene”, “tranquil”).

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because I was born and raised in Tokyo and enjoy escaping the city. For instance, when I visit the countryside I often photograph flowers and trees, as the natural scenery is tranquil and refreshing, unlike the busy streets of the city.

Gợi ý: Clarify meaning and fix grammar. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then give two clear, contrasted examples using linking words (“for example”, “on the other hand”). Avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases (e.g. “I am still girl”).

Ví dụ: I enjoy views both in my country and abroad. For example, from a high tower in Tokyo I can see the whole cityscape, while in Hawaii I love photographing completely different scenery, such as sandy beaches and palm trees.

× Yes of course my dad and mom are not good at taking photos so I am used to.

✓ Yes, of course; my dad and mom are not good at taking photos, so I am used to it.

The original sentence omits the object 'it' after 'used to'. The phrase 'be used to' requires a noun or pronoun (or verb-ing) to indicate what one is accustomed to. Add 'it' to complete the phrase and add commas for clarity.

× I used to take photos since I was little and now I have my own phone so I do usually take pictures when I go to a new place.

✓ I have taken photos since I was little, and now that I have my own phone I usually take pictures when I go to a new place.

The phrase 'used to' indicates a past habit and conflicts with 'since I was little' which requires present perfect ('have taken') to show a continuing action. Also move adverb 'usually' to a natural position ('usually take') and add conjunction punctuation for clarity.

× I prefer rural areas because I was born and raised in Tokyo, so I enjoy escaping the city.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I was born and raised in Tokyo, so I enjoy escaping the city.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. It clearly explains reason and result. (Included to show no issues found.)

× When I visit the countryside, I often take pictures of flowers and trees because the natural scenery is peaceful and refreshing.

✓ When I visit the countryside, I often take pictures of flowers and trees because the natural scenery is peaceful and refreshing.

This sentence is correct. 'Visiting' could be used in a different structure but 'When I visit' is appropriate. No grammar changes required.

× I do both, I am still girl so when I go to the high tower I can see all of views of Tokyo for example but when I visit Hawaii they has completely different views such as beaches and palm trees which I like.

✓ I do both. I am still a girl, so when I go to a tall tower I can see all the views of Tokyo, for example; but when I visit Hawaii, it has completely different scenery such as beaches and palm trees, which I like.

Multiple issues: missing article 'a' before 'girl' (article error), 'high tower' is unnatural — use 'tall tower', 'all of views' should be 'all the views' (article and noun phrase), run-on sentence needs splitting or punctuation (sentence structure), and 'they has' is incorrect subject-verb and pronoun choice — use singular 'it has' to refer to 'Hawaii' (incorrect use of pronouns and subject-verb agreement). Also 'views' vs 'scenery' — 'scenery' is more natural for landscape. Corrections address pronouns, articles, verb agreement, and sentence flow.