Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and use a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid minor grammar slips (e.g., “specially” → “especially”) and redundant phrasing like “in order for me to.” Use a linking phrase to connect examples.

Ví dụ: Yes — I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I just bought a new camera last week to capture celebrations and memorable moments, and I often photograph scenic landscapes such as mountains and forests because they feel peaceful.

Gợi ý: Begin with a direct statement and avoid repeating the word “view.” Be specific about what you like in rural scenes and use a linking word to connect reasons and feelings. Correct minor content inconsistency (beach and skyline are not typically rural).

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because of their natural beauty and tranquility. For instance, I like photographing quiet beaches, woodland areas, and open fields, which help me relax and make me feel happier after a shoot.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence and link your travel habit to the preference. Provide one specific vivid detail about a scene you photographed to make the answer more memorable. Keep within four sentences and avoid weak phrases like “a person that.”

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because traveling lets me discover new landscapes and cultures. For example, when I went to Hong Kong recently I photographed the dazzling city lights from Victoria Peak after taking the Peak Tram, and those night shots became keepsakes of the trip.

× Just last week I bought a camera in order for me to capture moments, specially when there are celebrations.

✓ Just last week I bought a camera in order to capture moments, especially during celebrations.

Use 'in order to' (not 'in order for me to') for purpose with a verb; 'specially' is incorrect here — use 'especially'; use 'during' rather than 'when there are' for natural collocation with 'celebrations'. Suggestion: Replace 'in order for me to' with 'in order to', 'specially' with 'especially', and 'when there are celebrations' with 'during celebrations'.

× I also enjoy taking pictures of scenic views, especially mountains and trees.

✓ I also enjoy taking pictures of scenic views, especially of mountains and trees.

Add the preposition 'of' after 'especially' to show the items being emphasized. This makes the noun phrase parallel and grammatically complete. Suggestion: Use 'especially of mountains and trees' or 'especially mountains and trees' in informal speech, but 'especially of' is clearer.

× I prefer views in rural areas because of the great view.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because of the great views.

Singular 'the great view' conflicts with plural 'views' earlier. Use plural 'views' to agree in number and be consistent. Suggestion: Use plural nouns consistently: 'the great views'.

× I would take photographs of the beach and the beautiful skyline.

✓ I would take photographs of beaches and beautiful skylines.

Sentence mixes singular and definite article with general preference. To describe general habit or preference, use plural nouns without 'the'. Suggestion: For general statements, use plural nouns: 'photographs of beaches and beautiful skylines.' Alternatively, keep singular but add 'the' consistently if referring to specific places.

× I prefer views in different countries. I am a person that likes to travel.

✓ I prefer views in different countries. I am a person who likes to travel.

Use 'who' for people rather than 'that'. 'That' is acceptable for things but 'who' is better for people. Suggestion: Replace 'that' with 'who' when referring to people.

× Recently I traveled to Hong Kong where I saw the scenic views and the city lights.

✓ Recently I traveled to Hong Kong, where I saw scenic views and city lights.

Comma is needed before the relative clause 'where...' and removing 'the' makes the statement more natural when referring to views and lights in general. Suggestion: Use a comma before 'where' and omit 'the' for general references: 'saw scenic views and city lights.'

× I also went to the Peak Tram and captured photographs that I kept as keepsakes.

✓ I also rode the Peak Tram and took photographs that I kept as keepsakes.

You 'ride' a tram (not generally 'go to' the tram) and 'took' is the usual past tense verb for making photos; 'captured photographs' is grammatically correct but less natural in spoken English. Suggestion: Use natural collocations: 'rode the Peak Tram' and 'took photographs'.