Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do, because I can records sometimes, sometimes unforgettable and memory something beautiful.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I prefer in rural areas because it is relaxed for me to take photos near close to the nature.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer in other countries because I like to experience something brand new and other countries always attracted me to go around.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、语法正确并直接回应问题。可用一句主题句表达喜好,随后用一两句具体说明原因并用连接词衔接,避免重复和语法错误。例如注意动词形式(record → record/record memories)、词序和冠词使用。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me record beautiful and memorable moments. For instance, I often photograph sunsets and landscapes to remember the colors and atmosphere.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 54.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并修正语法错误。先给出明确偏好句,然后用一到两句具体理由支持,使用连接词如 "because" 或 "so"。注意介词和形容词搭配(relaxed → relaxing;near close to the nature → close to nature)。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because they are more relaxing and offer closer access to nature. For example, quiet fields and forests let me photograph wildlife and natural light without distractions.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答需更流畅并使用正确时态与表达。先直接说明偏好,然后给出具体原因和例子,避免模糊表达(something brand new → new experiences;attracted me to go around → attract me or make me want to travel)。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering new scenes and cultures. For example, traveling abroad lets me photograph different architecture and landscapes that I can't find at home.
× Yes, I do, because I can records sometimes, sometimes unforgettable and memory something beautiful.
✓ Yes, I do, because I can record moments sometimes, sometimes unforgettable memories of something beautiful.
问题类型:名词与动词的单复数不一致,以及词序和搭配错误。具体错误:动词“records”与主语“I”不匹配,应该用不带 -s 的原形“record”;名词“memory”在这里应使用复数“memories”且与形容词搭配错误;句子词序混乱,建议将“moments”或“unforgettable memories”作为并列短语。改进建议:把动词改为单数主语相配的形式(I + record),使用复数名词表达多个记忆(memories),并调整词序为“record moments”或“unforgettable memories”。
× I prefer in rural areas because it is relaxed for me to take photos near close to the nature.
✓ I prefer rural areas because it is relaxing for me to take photos close to nature.
问题类型:介词和词组使用不当。具体错误:短语“I prefer in rural areas”不需要介词“in”,正确说法是“I prefer rural areas”;“it is relaxed for me”应使用形容词“relaxing”描述让人放松的感觉;“near close to the nature”包含冗余结构,“near”和“close to”不能同时使用,且“the nature”中通常去掉定冠词,正确为“nature”。改进建议:去掉不必要的介词,使用正确形容词形式,并选择一个表示接近的短语(close to 或 near),同时去掉“the”。
× I prefer in other countries because I like to experience something brand new and other countries always attracted me to go around.
✓ I prefer other countries because I like to experience brand-new things, and other countries always attract me to travel around.
问题类型:介词与时态/语态使用不当。具体错误:短语“I prefer in other countries”不需要介词“in”;“experience something brand new”中“something brand new”搭配不自然,建议“brand-new things”或“brand-new experiences”;“other countries always attracted me to go around”时态和动词形式错误,应该用一般现在时“attract”表示常态,且“to go around”更自然为“to travel around”。改进建议:去掉不必要的介词,使用自然搭配“brand-new things/experiences”,将动词改为一般现在时“attract”,并用“travel around”替换“go around”。