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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Yes, I very like like taking pictures. I like to use the picture to make my memories. Especially in different place, different country I will take many picture pictures.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

I like rural areas more because I live in urban. I live in the city and I see the tall buildings every day so the rural areas is more different for me.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

I prefer other countries because other countries has different cultures and different different experience. So it's fresh to me and I like different culture.

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Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 64.0

Gợi ý: 回答需要更自然、简洁并注意语法和重复的问题。建议:1) 用自然的句型开头(如“I enjoy taking photos.”);2) 避免词语重复(不要说“两次like/ picture”);3) 用一两句补充具体细节(比如你拍什么样的景物或用什么设备);4) 控制在最多5句内。练习多用过去或现在时的一致形式和可数名词的复数/单数形式。

Ví dụ: I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me preserve memories. For example, when I visit a new city I often photograph streets and local landmarks with my phone. These pictures let me revisit those moments later.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更流畅并修正语法错误。建议:1) 直接陈述偏好并给出简要原因;2) 注意冠词和动词形式(例如“the rural areas is”应为“rural areas are”或“the countryside is”);3) 用连接词(because, so, therefore)使逻辑更清晰;4) 提供具体对比细节(如安静、自然景色)。

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because I live in a busy city with tall buildings. In the countryside I can enjoy quiet surroundings and open fields, which feels refreshing after noisy urban life.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 需要更精确表达并避免重复。建议:1) 用更自然的句型(例如“I prefer views in other countries.”);2) 修正主谓一致(“other countries has”应为“other countries have”或“another country has”);3) 说明具体原因并给出例子(比如不同建筑风格、饮食或节日);4) 控制句子长度并使用连接词增强连贯性。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different cultures and scenery. For instance, I enjoy seeing traditional architecture and local markets abroad, which give me a fresh perspective compared to familiar places at home.

Ngữ pháp

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Yes, I very like like taking pictures.

Yes, I really like taking pictures.

句中‘very like’是不正确的搭配。英语中动词like前通常用副词修饰,如'really'或'very much',而不是形容词'very'直接放在动词前。另外原句有重复的单词'like like',应去掉多余部分。建议使用'adverb + verb'结构,如'really like'或'like ... very much'。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× I like to use the picture to make my memories.

I like to use pictures to keep my memories.

原句中使用定冠词'the'和单数形式'picture'不合上下文,且动词短语'make my memories'不自然。常用表达是'use pictures to keep/remember memories'或'make memories'(意为'创造回忆')。若想表达'保存回忆',应使用'keep my memories'或'save my memories'。同时将单数改为复数更符合习惯用法。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× Especially in different place, different country I will take many picture pictures.

Especially in different places and different countries, I will take many pictures.

原句中'place'和'country'应使用复数形式以匹配'many pictures',且连接词和标点缺失造成句子不清晰。应使用'places and countries'并在句首或从句后加入逗号分隔。注意去掉重复单词'picture pictures'并使用复数'pictures'。

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× I live in the city and I see the tall buildings every day so the rural areas is more different for me.

I live in the city and I see tall buildings every day, so rural areas are more different to me.

原句中主语'rural areas'是复数,但谓语使用单数'is',这是主谓不一致错误。应改为复数动词'are'。另外'the tall buildings'可省略定冠词'the'以表示一般性,'more different for me'也不太地道,常用表达是'more different to me'或'seem more different to me'。

14: Incorrect use of quantifiers

× I prefer other countries because other countries has different cultures and different different experience.

I prefer other countries because they have different cultures and different experiences.

句中重复使用'other countries'不自然,可以用代词'they'代替。'other countries has'存在主谓不一致,复数主语应使用'have'。另外'experience'在此处应使用复数'experiences'或改为'an experience',并删除重复的'different'。

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× So it's fresh to me and I like different culture.

So it's refreshing to me and I like different cultures.

'fresh'用来形容事物通常指新鲜的食物或空气,形容感受时更常用'refreshing'或'new'。此外'culture'需用复数'cultures'以表示多种不同的文化,或用'the different culture'结合定冠词和单数时表某种特定文化。建议改为'refreshing'并将'culture'改为复数。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
FreshNewly picked; Young; Refreshed; Chilly
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
TallIn height; Demanding
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