Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 内容积极但句子过长且有冗余，影响自然与连贯。要把答案分成1个主题句加1–2个简短的支持句，使用连接词并注意冠词与词形（例如“social media”前不一定要加“the”，且用“experiment with”）。可增加一两个具体例子（拍摄地点或喜欢的拍摄角度）以丰富内容。

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy photographing different views when I travel. It helps me remember special places, and I often experiment with angles and natural light to get the best shot. For example, on a recent trip to the coast I climbed a hill to capture the shoreline at sunset, which made the photo much more dramatic.

Gợi ý: 回答直接但有重复与小语病（最后一句重复“both”且“both of them both”不自然）。应给出主题句并用一两个具体对比点支持，用连接词（e.g. however、on the other hand）使结构清晰。句子长度控制在三到四句内。

Ví dụ: It depends on my mood or company; I enjoy both. Urban views appeal to me because of the architecture and vibrant street life, while rural scenes are relaxing and full of natural beauty. However, if I had to choose, I might prefer the countryside for peaceful landscapes.

Gợi ý: 回答存在明显错误与模糊（如“CD views”不明确，“all the times”不正确），并且重复前一问题的内容，缺乏针对“own country vs other countries”的具体比较。应直接回答问题并提供具体原因或例子，避免模糊词汇和重复句式。

Ví dụ: I enjoy views both at home and abroad, but for different reasons. Local sights feel familiar and meaningful because of personal memories, whereas views in other countries are exciting because they show different cultures and landscapes. For instance, I love seeing historic streets at home, but overseas I enjoy unique natural formations or architecture I haven't seen before.

× I love taking photos when I travel because capturing beautiful scenery helps me remember the moments and places I visited and I enjoy sharing photos on the social media with friends and I like to experiment different angles and lighting that get the perfect shot.

✓ I love taking photos when I travel because capturing beautiful scenery helps me remember the moments and places I visited. I enjoy sharing photos on social media with friends, and I like to experiment with different angles and lighting to get the perfect shot.

句子过长且结构混乱，需要分句以保持清晰。原句中缺少介词“with”（experiment with），以及不定式“to get”更适合表示目的。将三个并列部分分为独立句并补上缺失的介词和不定式，可以提高表达准确性和可读性。建议：注意并列句之间用连词或句号分开；使用固定搭配“experiment with”；用“to + 动词”表示目的。

× I enjoy sharing photos on the social media with friends

✓ I enjoy sharing photos on social media with friends

在英语中，“social media”作为不可数名词使用时通常不加定冠词“the”。除非特指某个具体的平台或集合，否则去掉“the”。建议：记住“on social media”是常用搭配。

× I like to experiment different angles and lighting that get the perfect shot.

✓ I like to experiment with different angles and lighting to get the perfect shot.

“experiment”通常与介词“with”连用，后面接宾语；原句缺少介词且用“that get”表达目的不自然，改为不定式“to get”更符合目的状语的用法。建议：使用正确动词短语“experiment with + 宾语”，用“to + 动词”表示目的。

× I think both of them both.

✓ I think both of them.

句子中出现重复“both”，造成冗余和语法错误。“both of them”已完整表达“二者皆然”。建议：避免重复使用相同词语。

× Sometimes I really like the excitement and energy of the CD views, but all the times I just want the calm of the countryside.

✓ Sometimes I really like the excitement and energy of city views, but other times I just want the calm of the countryside.

原句中“CD views”似为笔误，应为“city views”。此外“all the times”用法不当，正确表达应为“other times”表示“有时/另一些时候”。建议：注意拼写并使用固定短语“other times”。

× I think both of both have.

✓ I think both have their advantages.

原句语法混乱且重复“both”，缺乏明确主语和谓语。应表达“两者都有优点”用更自然的英语表达。建议：使用简洁明了的句子结构，例如“both have their advantages/benefits”。