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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

I like taking pictures of different views like mountains and plants.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

I prefer views in rural areas 'cause I can feel the natural sceneries and take a breath in fresh air.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

Approve reviews in other countries even even in my own countries the views may be more beauty, but other countries are those places I have never been and I can feel the local cultures by visit the views.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答直接但比較簡短,語言有點單調。可以加一個主題句並用一兩個具體細節說明為什麼喜歡拍照,並用連接詞使表達更流暢。注意避免語法小錯誤,例如單複數和介詞使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, I often take shots of mountains because I like their changing shapes at sunrise, and I also capture close-ups of plants to show textures and colors.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 表達比較自然但口語化縮寫('cause)不夠正式,句子可以更精練並提供一到兩個具體例子說明為何喜歡鄉村風景(如安靜、空氣、光線)。使用連接詞使理由更清楚。

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they offer peace and cleaner air. For instance, I enjoy walking by fields in the morning when the light is soft, which helps me relax and take better photographs.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 這個回答語法錯誤多且重複(如“even even”、“Approve reviews”不通),意思不夠清晰。應先給出簡潔立場,再用一兩句具體原因支持(例如探索新文化、拍攝獨特風景),注意語法和句子結構。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new cultural experiences and scenery I haven't seen before. For example, visiting a traditional market or coastal town abroad often gives me fresh photo subjects and insights into local life.

Ngữ pháp

8: Verb + -ing form

× I like taking pictures of different views like mountains and plants.

I like taking pictures of different views, such as mountains and plants.

句子本身使用动名词“taking”是正确的,但“like”在此处表列举时更自然用“such as”或“like”的结构后接具体例子。建议在“views”和“like”之间加逗号并用“such as”使表达更清晰和地道。

6: Present tense issue

× I prefer views in rural areas 'cause I can feel the natural sceneries and take a breath in fresh air.

I prefer views in rural areas because I can enjoy the natural scenery and breathe in the fresh air.

原句中时态总体为一般现在,适合描述偏好与习惯。存在几个问题:1) 非正式缩写'cause应写为because以符合正式口语/书面语;2) “can feel the natural sceneries”中“sceneries”用法不自然,scenery通常作不可数名词;3) “take a breath in fresh air”中动词短语更自然为“breathe in the fresh air”。建议使用一般现在时的稳定表达。

26: Sentence structure errors

× Approve reviews in other countries even even in my own countries the views may be more beauty, but other countries are those places I have never been and I can feel the local cultures by visit the views.

I prefer viewing places in other countries. Even though the views in my own country may be more beautiful, other countries are places I have never visited, and I can experience the local culture by visiting those sites.

原句存在多处句子结构错误:1) 开头的“Approve reviews”不符合语法与语意,应改为“I prefer viewing places”或“I prefer visiting places”;2) 重复“even even”且连接词使用不当,要用“even though”引导让步从句;3) “my own countries”应为“my own country”(单数)或“my own country”;4) “more beauty”应为形容词“more beautiful”或“better”——这里用“more beautiful”;5) “other countries are those places I have never been and I can feel the local cultures by visit the views”中“been”后缺少逗号,且“feel the local cultures by visit the views”语法错误,应使用动名词“visiting”并用“experience the local culture”更自然。建议把句子拆分为两句,使用正确的从句连接和动名词形式。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
FreshNewly picked; Young; Refreshed; Chilly
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