Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, reduce hesitations, correct plural/singular and article errors, and give one specific supporting detail with a linking word. For example, say why you enjoy it and mention a typical subject you photograph.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. I enjoy photography because it makes me feel creative and proud, and I often photograph sunsets on special occasions such as anniversaries.

Gợi ý: Provide a direct answer first and then give specific supporting reasons using linking words. Improve verb tense and sentence completeness, avoid repetition and hesitations. Mention a clear preference or say it depends and explain why with examples.

Ví dụ: It depends, but I prefer rural views because I grew up in the countryside. For example, I often photographed wide-open fields and dramatic sunsets there, which you rarely see in the city.

Gợi ý: Answer clearly and avoid vague or incorrect words. Begin with a topic sentence stating your preference, correct country name and vocabulary, and give specific examples of landscapes or feelings using linking words. Eliminate hesitations and ensure sentences are complete.

Ví dụ: I prefer the views in my own country because Vietnam has many stunning landscapes, such as terraced rice fields and dramatic coastal cliffs. However, I also enjoy visiting other countries because they offer different scenery and new perspectives.

× I'm a big fans of taking photo, uh, because it's, uh, give me a sense of, uh, artist or accomplishment.

✓ I'm a big fan of taking photos because it gives me a sense of artistry and accomplishment.

'Fans' should be singular 'fan' to match the singular 'I' (singular and plural issue). 'Photo' should be plural 'photos' because taking pictures refers to multiple images. 'It's, uh, give' is incorrect verb form and subject-verb agreement; replace with 'it gives' (present tense third-person singular). 'Artist' is a noun; the intended meaning is likely 'artistry' or 'being artistic', so change to 'artistry'. Remove filler words for clarity.

× I usually, uh, capture some sunset on, uh, anniversary.

✓ I usually capture sunsets on anniversaries.

Use plural 'sunsets' and 'anniversaries' to match habitual action. The original used singular nouns awkwardly. 'Capture' is fine as base verb for habitual present; no -ing needed. This fixes noun number and natural collocation.

× I think it depends on where I live uh, when I was young I live with my family in rural areas so I usually take picture about sunsets or uh, beautiful sky when I. I.

✓ I think it depends on where I live. When I was young, I lived with my family in the countryside, so I usually took pictures of sunsets and the beautiful sky.

Tense consistency: the clause 'When I was young' requires past tense 'lived' not 'live' (past tense issue). Also 'usually take' should shift to past 'usually took' to match context. 'Rural areas' is better expressed as 'the countryside' and 'take picture about' is incorrect preposition and singular/plural; use 'took pictures of'. Split into two sentences for clarity.

× Uh, it a good question for me.

✓ Uh, it's a good question for me.

Missing verb 'is' causes sentence to be ungrammatical; contraction 'it's' (it is) fixes it. This is also subject-verb presence (sentence without a verb if left out), but corrected here under singular/plural/verb presence to restore grammaticality.

× Uh, I think I love my country Vietnamese so beautiful and have many uh, land beautiful landscape such as wing halal or meat cabbies.

✓ I think I love my country. Vietnam is so beautiful and has many beautiful landscapes such as wetlands or rice paddies.

Pronoun and noun use: 'my country Vietnamese' is incorrect; use 'my country' then name 'Vietnam'. 'Vietnamese' is adjective or demonym; needs correct form. 'Have many land beautiful landscape' has word order and noun errors; correct to 'has many beautiful landscapes'. The examples 'wing halal' and 'meat cabbies' appear to be misheard phrases; likely intended 'wetlands' and 'rice paddies' (common Vietnamese landscapes). Also correct verb agreement 'has' for singular 'Vietnam'. Use clear noun phrases.

× Umm but when I go to other country I fall so.

✓ But when I go to other countries, I also enjoy them very much.

Original sentence is incomplete and unclear ('I fall so' is ungrammatical). Fix sentence structure to express likely meaning: enjoyment of other countries. Use plural 'countries' for general statement and add adverb 'also' and 'enjoy them very much' to convey feeling. Ensure comma after introductory clause.