Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise, correct grammar, and organize the response: give a clear topic sentence, one or two specific supporting details, and avoid repetition. Use linking words (for example, because, so, when) and correct word choices (memory, exciting, feel).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because photos help me remember places I visit. For example, when I travel to a new city, I take pictures of landmarks and street scenes so I can look back and recall how the place looked and felt.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar and vocabulary (greenery, seaside, less litter/pollution), and link ideas smoothly. Provide one specific reason and a brief example to support your preference.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they have more greenery and cleaner air. For instance, when I visit the countryside or the seaside, there are trees and open fields and much less litter and traffic noise, which makes the scenery more relaxing.

Gợi ý: Avoid unclear or potentially sensitive statements; be specific and polite. State your preference clearly, give concrete reasons (cleanliness, architecture, variety) and use correct grammar. Replace vague phrases like 'civic sense' and 'forum' with clear terms (public behavior, foreign cities).

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because cities abroad often look cleaner and have different architectural styles. For example, when I visited a European city, I noticed tidy streets, well-preserved buildings, and a variety of parks, which made sightseeing more enjoyable.

× I mostly like to take a picture of different view because when we capture a picture in our mobile phone, they are like the memory and when we see new place and new thing which is very excitement exciting, when we capture it, it feel like the historical think that we see before.

✓ I mostly like to take pictures of different views because when we capture pictures on our mobile phones, they are like memories, and when we see a new place or new things that are very exciting, capturing them feels like preserving what we have seen before.

Errors: inconsistent singular/plural nouns (picture/pictures, view/views, phone/phones, memory/memories, place/places, thing/things), and verb agreement (it feel -> capturing them feels). Suggestion: Use plural nouns when speaking generally (pictures, views, phones, memories, things) and ensure subject-verb agreement (capturing them feels). Also replace 'in our mobile phone' with 'on our mobile phones' and simplify sentence structure for clarity.

× ...which is very excitement exciting, when we capture it, it feel like the historical think that we see before.

✓ ...which is very exciting; when we capture it, it feels like a historical record of what we have seen before.

Error: 'excitement' (a noun) used instead of adjective 'exciting'; 'think' (verb/noun) wrong for 'thing' or 'record'. Also tense and agreement: 'it feel' should be 'it feels' and 'we see before' should be 'we have seen before'. Suggestion: Use appropriate adjective forms and correct verb tenses and agreement.

× when we capture a picture in our mobile phone

✓ when we capture a picture on our mobile phone

Error: incorrect preposition 'in' with 'mobile phone'. Use 'on' to indicate photos stored on device. Also consider plural 'phones' if referring to multiple people.

× I mostly prefer a view in a rural area because a rural area they are much greenery.

✓ I mostly prefer views in rural areas because rural areas have a lot of greenery.

Errors: tense/number and structure: 'prefer a view in a rural area' sounds specific; use plural for general preference. 'they are much greenery' is ungrammatical — use 'have a lot of greenery'. Suggestion: Use plural nouns for general statements and 'have' with uncountable noun 'greenery'.

× I mostly prefer a view in a rural area because a rural area they are much greenery.

✓ I mostly prefer views in rural areas because rural areas have a lot of greenery.

Error: redundant and incorrect pronoun 'they' referring to 'a rural area'. Pronoun number mismatch. Suggestion: Remove redundant pronoun and match number (areas -> they) or rephrase.

× I also view uh Seaview where is a more greenery and there is a less paper and also there is less pollution.

✓ I also like sea views where there is more greenery, less litter, and less pollution.

Errors: 'view Seaview' incorrect noun usage; singular/plural mismatch; 'there is a less paper' should be 'less litter' or 'less paper' without article. Suggestion: Use 'sea views' and uncountable 'less litter' and parallel structure.

× I also view uh Seaview where is a more greenery

✓ I also like sea views where there is more greenery

Error: wrong word order and preposition use ('where is a more greenery'). Suggestion: Use 'where there is more greenery' for correct clause order and 'more greenery' without article.

× But in a forum they are very clean cities and a very, uh, bigger, uh, houses.

✓ But in other countries there are very clean cities and much bigger houses.

Errors: 'a forum' incorrect word; wrong quantifiers and articles: 'a very bigger houses' is ungrammatical. Use 'much bigger houses' or 'much larger houses' and plural 'cities'. Suggestion: Use 'other countries' and correct comparative structure 'much bigger houses'.

× But in a forum they are very clean cities and a very, uh, bigger, uh, houses.

✓ But in other countries there are very clean cities and much bigger houses.

Error: 'they' incorrectly used for 'other countries' and sentence structure. Suggestion: Use 'there are' to introduce existence and correct plural agreement.

× in my country there are lot of policemen due to many people are have no civic sense much.

✓ In my country there are a lot of policemen because many people do not have much civic sense.

Errors: word order and auxiliary verbs: 'due to many people are have no' is incorrect. Use 'because' for clause and 'do not have' for negative present. Also include article 'a lot of'. Suggestion: Use correct negation and causal conjunctions.

× due to many people are have no civic sense much.

✓ because many people do not have much civic sense.

Error: 'have no civic sense much' awkward; 'much' should modify 'have' structure 'do not have much'. Suggestion: Use 'do not have much civic sense' or 'lack civic sense'.

× That's why I mostly prefer to view in other country.

✓ That's why I mostly prefer to view other countries.

Errors: article and preposition: 'in other country' should be 'other countries' or 'in another country'. Suggestion: For general preference use plural 'other countries' or singular 'in another country'.