Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like taking picture of different place because I like travel and I like share my picture with my friends.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I like taking picture in rural areas because in the rural areas have many mountain and water. I like it.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefers picture in other countries because I like travel and I want see different area and I like share the picture with my friends.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 首先,回答要更自然并且語法正確,避免語法錯誤和單數/複數不一致。可以用一個主題句直接回答,然後用一到兩句具體細節支持,如說明為何喜歡拍照和會怎麼分享。連接詞能讓表達更流暢,例如 because, so, and, when。最後控制在最多五句內。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different scenes because I love travelling. I often capture landscapes and cityscapes to remember places I visit, and I usually share the best shots with my friends on social media.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答要更具體並修正語法(例如 'there are' 而非 'have',名詞複數形式等)。在一個主題句後用一兩句細節說明原因與偏好,並用連接詞如 because, so, and 連接想法。可加入比較或例子讓內容更豐富。
Ví dụ: I prefer photographing rural areas because there are more natural features like mountains and rivers. For example, I enjoy capturing misty valleys at sunrise, which creates a peaceful atmosphere that you rarely find in cities.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 注意主語動詞一致(prefer 不加 s),並把句子重組為一個清晰的主題句加上具體原因。提供具體細節,例如想看哪些不同的景色或文化,如何分享這些照片,會讓回答更有說服力。使用連接詞如 because, so, for example 增強連貫性。
Ví dụ: I prefer photographing views in other countries because I enjoy discovering different landscapes and cultures. For instance, I love taking street photos in foreign cities to capture unique architecture and local life, then I share these images with friends to tell them about my trips.
× Yes, I like taking picture of different place because I like travel and I like share my picture with my friends.
✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different places because I like to travel and I like to share my pictures with my friends.
句子中多个名词需要复数形式:'picture' 应为复数 'pictures'(泛指不同的照片),'place' 应为复数 'places'(指不同的地点)。此外,动词 'like' 后面要接不定式 'to travel' 和 'to share' 或动名词,两者可接受,但需一致;这里改为 'to travel' 和 'to share' 更自然。建议:遇到表示“不同的……/多个……”时,名词通常用复数;在 'like' 后保持动词形式一致。
× I like taking picture in rural areas because in the rural areas have many mountain and water. I like it.
✓ I like taking pictures in rural areas because there are many mountains and bodies of water in the rural areas. I like them.
原句中有多个介词和结构错误:1) 'taking picture in' 中 'picture' 应为复数 'pictures'(参见前一句);2) 原句 'in the rural areas have many mountain and water' 缺少形式主语或完整主语谓语结构,应使用 'there are' 表示“有”;3) 'mountain' 和 'water' 应为复数或更合适的表达:'mountains' 和 'bodies of water' 或 'rivers/lakes';4) 'I like it' 指代不明确,因复数对象应改为 'I like them'。建议:使用 'there are' 表示存在,名词根据意义用复数,并保持代词与先行词数一致。
× I prefers picture in other countries because I like travel and I want see different area and I like share the picture with my friends.
✓ I prefer pictures in other countries because I like to travel and I want to see different areas and I like to share the pictures with my friends.
问题包括第三人称单数错误和单复数、动词形式问题:1) 'I prefers' 中主语 'I' 不用于第三人称单数,动词应为 'prefer';2) 'picture' 和 'area' 应为复数形式 'pictures' 和 'areas';3) 'like travel' 和 'want see' 需要不定式 'to travel' 和 'to see',同样 'like share' 改为 'like to share' 或 'sharing';4) 'the picture' 改为 'the pictures' 与前文一致。建议:主语是 'I' 时动词不用加 -s;遇到多个地点/照片用复数;'want/like' 后接不定式或动名词,保持一致。