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Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Yeah, I like taking pictures because I like capture capturing all the all the moments that I have been such as the famous country or you can take a shop with the.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

I prefer the views in rural areas because there are many natural natural that you think such as the flower and grass and you may relax yourself. I really enjoy.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

Uh, I prefer the view in other country because I love exploring other place and I love going to other other country, which has the different to our, our country.

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Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁、有条理并注意语法。首先直接回应问题(喜欢/不喜欢),然后用一两句具体原因或例子支持。避免重复词和语法错误,注意动词时态与名词形式(比如 use “capture moments” 而不是 “capture capturing”)。可以使用连接词如 “because” 或 “for example” 来衔接观点与细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me capture memorable moments. For example, when I visit famous places or small shops during my travels, I take photos to remember the atmosphere and details.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: 回答应直接给出偏好,然后用具体细节解释原因。避免重复词(例如 “natural natural”),并用正确的名词形式(比如 “natural scenery” or “natural landscapes”)。使用连接词如 “because” 和 “for example” 来增强连贯性,同时保证句子完整。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because the natural scenery is more relaxing. For example, I enjoy seeing fields of flowers and green grass, which help me feel calm and refreshed.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更明确并提供具体原因或比较。直接回答偏好后,给出清晰的理由并举例。注意冠词和复数形式(例如 “other countries”, “other places”),并避免重复。可用连接词如 “because” 或 “because of” 引出原因。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy exploring new places and experiencing different landscapes and cultures. For example, visiting coastal towns abroad often offers scenery and traditions that are very different from those at home.

Ngữ pháp

8: Verb + -ing form

× Yeah, I like taking pictures because I like capture capturing all the all the moments that I have been such as the famous country or you can take a shop with the.

Yeah, I like taking pictures because I like capturing all the moments I have had, such as famous places or shops.

动名词/不定式用法错误:在动词“like”之后应使用动名词(-ing)形式,因此用“capturing”而不是“capture”。句子中还有冗余词("all the all the")和时态混用,改为“the moments I have had”更符合现在完成时表达过去经历。另外“famous country”用法不自然,改为“famous places or shops”。建议:在“like/ enjoy/ hate/avoid”等动词后使用动名词形式,检查并删除重复词,保持短语搭配自然。

26: Sentence structure errors

× I prefer the views in rural areas because there are many natural natural that you think such as the flower and grass and you may relax yourself. I really enjoy.

I prefer views in rural areas because there are many natural things, such as flowers and grass, and you can relax there. I really enjoy it.

句子结构混乱与词汇错误:"natural natural that you think" 不合语法,应为"natural things"或直接列举自然景物;名词单复数错误(flower → flowers);"you may relax yourself" 更自然的表达为"you can relax there"或"you can relax yourself"视语境而定。此外最后的独立句“I really enjoy.”缺少宾语,需补全为“I really enjoy it.” 建议:列举时使用复数或不可数名词,保持句子主谓宾完整,避免重复词。

22: Article errors

× I prefer the view in other country because I love exploring other place and I love going to other other country, which has the different to our, our country.

I prefer the views in other countries because I love exploring other places and I love going to other countries, which are different from our country.

冠词与数的一致性错误:可数名词复数形式与冠词搭配不当。应使用复数“views in other countries”“other places”“other countries”。短语“different to our, our country”表达错误,正确应为“different from our country”。建议:表示泛指其他国家/地方时用复数形式,注意固定搭配“different from”。

1: Singular and plural issue

× such as the famous country or you can take a shop with the.

such as famous countries or shops.

单复数不一致与搭配不当:"the famous country"在此应表示泛指多个著名地点,使用复数"famous countries",且"take a shop with the"无意义,应改为"shops"或其他地点。建议:判断名词是泛指还是特指,选择可数名词的单数或复数并删除无意义片段。

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× which has the different to our, our country.

which are different from our country.

主谓一致与搭配错误:先行词为复数(other countries/places),关系代词从句谓语应使用复数“are”。此外“different to”应为“different from”。建议:确定先行词的数(单数或复数),使关系从句谓语一致,并使用正确介词搭配。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
FamousWell known
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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