Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce hesitations and repetitions, give a clear topic sentence and add one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct small grammar errors (e.g., "a single image can tell its own story"). Keep the answer concise (max 3–4 sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because they offer great variety and unique perspectives. For example, a city skyline at sunset can convey energy, while a quiet countryside scene can feel peaceful. A single image often tells its own story and evokes emotions.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct, grammatical topic sentence and avoid vague phrases. Give one clear, specific example and explain why it appeals to you using linking words (for example, "for example," "because," "so"). Fix sentence structure and collocations (e.g., "walking past cafés and along streets creates a lively atmosphere").

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because cities offer diverse sights and lively scenes. For example, walking past cafés and along busy streets exposes me to street art, interesting architecture, and people, which creates a lively atmosphere and inspires my photography.

Gợi ý: Be more concise and specific: state your preference clearly, then give 1–2 concrete reasons with examples. Reduce filler words and correct grammar (e.g., "other countries have different perspectives and unique details"; "a gloomy mood can be uplifting to me" is confusing — clarify meaning). Use linking words like "because" and "for example."

Ví dụ: I prefer photographing views in other countries because they offer different perspectives and unique details I don't see at home. For example, narrow alleys in an old European town or colorful markets in Asia provide fresh visual angles, and sometimes a moody, overcast sky can create a powerful, uplifting atmosphere in my photos.

× I also enjoy photography because single image can tell us, uh, own story.

✓ I also enjoy photography because a single image can tell its own story.

The sentence omits the article 'a' before 'single image' and uses the incorrect possessive 'us own story'. Use 'a' for singular countable nouns and 'its' to refer to 'image'. Suggestion: include articles with singular nouns and use correct possessive pronouns matched to the noun (its).

× For example, I enjoy walking past and coffee and inside of the street, which creates me, which creates a little atmosphere.

✓ For example, I enjoy walking past cafés and shops inside the street, which creates for me a pleasant atmosphere.

The original has incorrect or missing prepositions and nouns: 'walking past and coffee' is unclear; use 'cafés and shops' or simply 'cafés'. 'inside of the street' is unnatural; 'inside the street' is better as 'on the street' or 'in the street'. 'which creates me' is incorrect; use 'creates for me'. Also 'a little atmosphere' is odd; 'a pleasant atmosphere' is clearer. Suggestion: choose correct nouns and prepositions ('past', 'on/in the street', 'for me') and use suitable adjectives to describe atmosphere.

× Yes, I like taking, uh, pictures of different views, uh, because they have, they offer, uh, a lot of variety, uh, diversity and show different perspective.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because they offer a lot of variety and show different perspectives.

The sentence repeats pronouns and lacks plural agreement for 'perspective'. Use a single pronoun 'they' and ensure noun 'perspectives' is plural to match 'different'. Suggestion: avoid unnecessary repetition and match plural nouns with plural pronouns.

× I prefer views in urban areas because they offer a lot of diversity.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because they offer a lot of diversity.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no article change needed. Included to confirm correctness: 'urban areas' and 'a lot of diversity' are acceptable. No further action required.

× Uh, I guess I can say, uh, I prefer other countries because the other countries, uh, have different, uh, perspectives and the different angles, uh, even small details or also, uh, other country have a gloomy mood can uplift for, for me mood.

✓ I prefer other countries because they have different perspectives and angles; even small details can uplift my mood, even if the country has a gloomy atmosphere.

The original is a run-on with unclear coordination and subject agreement: 'other country have' should be 'other countries have' or 'a different country can have'. The phrase 'can uplift for, for me mood' is ungrammatical; use 'uplift my mood'. Also split into clearer clauses and use correct articles ('a gloomy atmosphere') or nouns. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and use clear clause boundaries; replace awkward phrases with natural expressions like 'uplift my mood' or 'gloomy atmosphere'.