Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I often like using different views to take a picture which will matter me. Photos more stunning and realistic.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
Yes, I prefer viewing Rulers because it's always has stunning sceneries like mountains, rivers and coastline which made me feel relaxing. The countryside is peaceful and has a fresh well. It's a great way to escape the noise.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer view my own countries because I more familiar with these areas. It's more convenient for traveling. For example, I can plan trips quickly and spend less time worrying about language and transportation.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 46.0Gợi ý: 回答不够自然且语法错误较多。要直接回应问题并用一两句具体理由或例子支持。注意主语和动词的一致性,避免模糊表达(如 “matter me” 不合适)。控制在最多五句话内,并使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because they capture unique moods. For example, I often shoot sunsets and city skylines, which look more dramatic and realistic in photos.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 回答较长但存在多处语法与词汇错误(如 “Rulers”, “has stunning sceneries”, “fresh well”)。应直接说明偏好并给出具体原因,使用连接词(because, so, for example),注意单复数和定冠词,句子不要冗长。
Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because the countryside has beautiful landscapes like mountains and rivers, which help me relax. For example, I enjoy walking along the coastline to escape the city noise.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 回答内容明确且使用了举例,但有语法错误(如 “prefer view my own countries”, “I more familiar”)。应改为完整的主谓结构并用简单连接词(because, for example)保持流畅。可再加一点具体细节提升说服力。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I am more familiar with the places and it's more convenient to travel. For example, I can plan trips quickly and avoid problems with language or transport, so I can relax and enjoy the scenery.
× Yes, I often like using different views to take a picture which will matter me. Photos more stunning and realistic.
✓ Yes, I often like to use different perspectives to take pictures that matter to me. The photos are more stunning and realistic.
错误类型为动词+ing形式滥用以及句子结构问题。原句中“like using”虽非完全错误,但更自然的表达是“like to use”或“like using different perspectives”,且“views”在此处用“perspectives”更合适;“to take a picture which will matter me”语法不正确,应为“to take pictures that matter to me” 或 “that are meaningful to me”;“Photos more stunning and realistic.” 缺少系动词,应为“The photos are more stunning and realistic.” 建议:使用“like to do”或“like doing”任选其一,注意定语从句使用正确的关系代词和被动/主动结构,并在描述性句子中加上系动词。
× Yes, I prefer viewing Rulers because it's always has stunning sceneries like mountains, rivers and coastline which made me feel relaxing. The countryside is peaceful and has a fresh well. It's a great way to escape the noise.
✓ Yes, I prefer viewing rural areas because they always have stunning scenery like mountains, rivers and coastlines, which make me feel relaxed. The countryside is peaceful and has fresh air. It's a great way to escape the noise.
错误类型为代词/指代与数量不一致以及词汇使用不当。原句“Rulers”显然写错,应为“rural areas”;“it's always has”混用了单数代词和动词,正确应为复数主语“they”与动词“have”;“sceneries”通常不可数,使用“scenery”;“coastline”复数应为“coastlines”或用单数“the coastline”;“which made me feel relaxing”时态与语态不当且“relaxing”应为描述人的感受用“relaxed”;“has a fresh well”词不达意,应为“has fresh air”。建议:注意名词可数性与单复数一致,代词和动词要保持一致,选择合适的词汇表达意图。
× I prefer view my own countries because I more familiar with these areas. It's more convenient for traveling. For example, I can plan trips quickly and spend less time worrying about language and transportation.
✓ I prefer visiting my own country because I am more familiar with these areas. It's more convenient for traveling. For example, I can plan trips quickly and spend less time worrying about the language and transportation.
错误类型为现在时态和结构问题。原句“I prefer view my own countries”中“prefer”后应接动词不定式或动名词,且“view”用法不当,应为“visit”或“visiting”;“my own countries”与后文“these areas”不一致,若指单一国家应为“my own country”;“I more familiar”缺少系动词,应为“I am more familiar”。建议:prefer后接动名词或不定式(prefer doing / prefer to do),注意主系表结构需完整,保持单复数一致。