Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答内容表达了喜好和原因，但存在重复、语法和停顿过多的问题，影响流利度和自然性。建议：1) 精简句子，避免重复同一信息；2) 用更自然的连接词（for example, because, so）来组织原因；3) 修正语法错误（如主谓一致与名词形式）；4) 控制句子在5句以内并提高流利度，可通过练习连贯陈述来减少“umm”。具体练习：用一到两句给出主题句，再用一到两句给出具体例子或感受。

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy photographing different views because capturing varied scenery gives me a strong sense of accomplishment. For example, when I photograph a sunrise over the mountains, I feel proud of how the colors and light come together, and that motivates me to keep improving.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了偏好，但存在词汇错误（viewer→views）、重复和语句不连贯的问题。建议：1) 使用正确词汇并避免重复；2) 提供具体比较理由（如安静、自然景观、更清新的空气）；3) 使用连接词（because, while, however）使对比更清晰；4) 保持句子简洁、语法正确。

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they are quieter and more peaceful, with open fields and fresh air. While urban areas are lively and interesting, I find the calm and natural scenery of the countryside much more relaxing.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了偏好和部分原因，但语法错误较多并且表达含糊（convenient, connected with the traditional and customers 不明确）。建议：1) 纠正语法（如时态和被动/主动结构），避免重复；2) 用更具体的理由说明为何偏爱本国（文化联系、熟悉的风景、语言便利等）；3) 使用连接词（because, since, therefore）使论述更连贯；4) 控制句数并给出具体例子支持观点。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I was born and raised here and feel a strong cultural connection to the landscapes. For instance, visiting local festivals and historical sites helps me appreciate familiar scenery in ways I wouldn’t experience abroad.

× I really love to do because, umm, taking more, taking different kinds of photos of scenery can give me a sense of accomplishment.

✓ I really love it because taking different kinds of photos of scenery can give me a sense of accomplishment.

句中原为“I really love to do because, umm, taking more, taking different kinds of photos...” 結構不自然且有多余片段。根據“verb + -ing form”類型，動詞“love”後面常接名詞、代詞或動名詞。把“不定式+多餘的片段”改為“love it because taking ...”或“love taking ...”更自然。建議：可說“I really love taking different kinds of photos of scenery...”以使用正確的動名詞形式並刪除冗詞。

× And then I'm that person who really like taking photos because, umm, when I see those scenery, it can help.

✓ And then I'm that person who really likes taking photos because, umm, when I see that scenery, it helps.

句中主語“who”指代單數“that person”，關係子句中的動詞應用第三人稱單數形式“likes”。另外“those scenery”不正確，scenery是不可數名詞，應用“that scenery”或直接“scenery”。最後“it can help”上下文不清，應改為更自然的“it helps”。建議：注意主語與動詞的一致（第三人稱單數用-s）及不可數名詞用法。

× Well, I think I would prefer viewers in rural areas, definitely.

✓ Well, I think I would prefer views in rural areas, definitely.

原句把“views（風景）”誤寫為“viewers（觀眾/觀看者）”，屬於代詞/名詞使用錯誤。根據限定列表，應改為“views”。建議：區分“view（景色/觀看）”與“viewer（觀眾）”，此處用“views”。

× Urban areas are more crowded and with bustle and hustle that is.

✓ Urban areas are more crowded and full of bustle and hustle.

原句“with bustle and hustle that is”語序與介詞用法不自然。“full of”用於表達充滿某種狀態更地道。此處屬於介詞使用或片語搭配錯誤。建議：使用“full of bustle and hustle”或“bustling and busy”。

× I mean they truly have a lot of people.

✓ I mean they really have a lot of people.

此句中“truly”語感不如“really”自然，但語法上可接受。根據限定列表僅修改時態錯誤，這裡無明顯時態錯誤，建議把“truly”改為更自然的副詞“really”。（此項為風格性微調，非必須）

× But for nature views, I I think I prefer nature views in UMM.

✓ But for nature views, I think I prefer them.

原句有重複“I I”且“in UMM”不明確（疑為口語停頓）。屬於句子結構與重複問題。簡化為“But for nature views, I think I prefer them.” 或明確地說“prefer nature views in rural areas”。建議：刪除重複詞並補全句子，使表達清晰。

× I would definitely say in my country because umm, I, I born, I was born and raised here.

✓ I would definitely say in my country because, umm, I was born and raised here.

原句“I born”缺少過去式被動動詞“was”，屬於過去時形式錯誤。應使用被動語態“was born”表示出生。建議：過去事件用過去時或過去被動（was/were + 過去分詞）。

× So the I'm more convenient, I'm more connected with the traditional and customers here.

✓ So it's more convenient for me; I'm more connected with the traditions and customs here.

原句“The I'm more convenient”不正確，代詞與結構錯誤。應用“it's more convenient for me”表達“對我更方便”。另外“the traditional and customers”詞語錯用，疑為“traditions and customs”。此屬於代詞與名詞選用錯誤。建議：使用固定表達“convenient for me”並確認名詞搭配（traditions and customs）。

× I would definitely think that where I live is better. It's more beautiful than others.

✓ I would definitely say that where I live is better. It's more beautiful than other places.

原句“than others”不夠清晰，需比較對象（other places）。屬於比較結構使用不當。建議：明確比較對象，說“than other places”或“than other countries/areas”。