Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and fluency: say 'taking pictures' and use correct verb forms and articles. Make a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details using linking words. Be concise and avoid contradictions (e.g., 'not my cup of tea' then 'occasionally').

Ví dụ: I don't usually take many pictures, but I occasionally photograph landscapes when they really impress me. For example, last summer I took photos of a dramatic sunset because of its vivid colors, and I enjoy keeping those memories.

Gợi ý: Clarify vocabulary and fix grammar: say 'rural landscapes' or the specific place name correctly; use 'peace and relaxation' and 'clear my mind' instead of 'create my mind'. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one specific reason with a linking word.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural landscapes because green fields and trees help me feel peaceful and relaxed. For instance, after a busy week I like to walk in the countryside to clear my mind and reduce stress.

Gợi ý: Improve accuracy and specificity: correct grammar ('landscapes', 'it is because they often offer') and avoid vague phrases like 'more quality' or 'windless towels' (probably 'wind-swept valleys'?). Give a clear reason and a concrete example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.

Ví dụ: I prefer landscapes in other countries because they often offer new and unique scenery. For example, I saw photos of the alpine mountains and wind-swept valleys that looked very different from landscapes at home, so I want to visit them to experience the variety.

× Well, taking picture is not really my cup of tea, however I occasionally photograph landscapes when it's actually impress me.

✓ Well, taking pictures is not really my cup of tea; however, I occasionally photograph landscapes when they actually impress me.

Errors: missing plural 'pictures' (article/number) and incorrect use of 'it's' and verb agreement. Use plural 'pictures' for general activity. Replace comma with semicolon and add comma after however for correct punctuation. 'It's actually impress me' is ungrammatical; use 'they actually impress me' because 'landscapes' is plural and requires plural pronoun and verb 'impress'.

× My preference is Lulu area landscapes because whenever I see green fields and trees, it gives me a sense of peaceful and relaxation.

✓ My preference is Lulu area landscapes because whenever I see green fields and trees, they give me a sense of peace and relaxation.

Error: noun-pronoun agreement and word choice. 'It gives' is incorrect because the plural subject 'green fields and trees' requires 'they give'. 'A sense of peaceful and relaxation' mixes adjective and noun; use 'a sense of peace and relaxation'. Also 'Lulu area landscapes' is acceptable but consider 'landscapes in the Lulu area' for clarity.

× I can unwind and create my mind after a busy week.

✓ I can unwind and clear my mind after a busy week.

Error: incorrect collocation 'create my mind' is ungrammatical. The correct phrase is 'clear my mind' meaning to relax. This is a sentence structure/word choice issue.

× Well, I prefer landscape in other countries. It is because it often offer more quality and new experiences.

✓ Well, I prefer landscapes in other countries. This is because they often offer higher quality and new experiences.

Errors: singular/plural and subject-verb agreement. 'Landscape' should be plural 'landscapes' to match general preference. 'It is because' is awkward; 'This is because' is clearer. 'It often offer' mixes singular subject with plural verb; use 'they often offer'. Also 'more quality' is better expressed as 'higher quality'.

× I have seen a lot of advertisement on social media about the mountains and windless towels.

✓ I have seen a lot of advertisements on social media about the mountains and windless towns.

Errors: 'a lot of advertisement' should be 'a lot of advertisements' (count noun plural). 'Windless towels' is likely a typo; context suggests 'windless towns' (places with little wind). If 'towels' was intended, it still needs plural 'towels' and clearer context. Ensure word choice matches intended meaning.