Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid repetition and correct minor grammar (e.g., article use and word order). Aim for 2–3 sentences under the 5-sentence limit.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views when I travel. For example, I often take pictures of mountains and lush Amazon scenery because I like capturing dramatic landscapes and natural colors.

Gợi ý: Open with a clear preference sentence, then give two specific reasons using linking words. Fix grammar (comparatives, word order) and avoid vague phrases. Keep it natural and succinct.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views to urban ones because the countryside is quieter and less crowded. In addition, the green spaces and friendly local people make the atmosphere more relaxing for me.

Gợi ý: Clarify your meaning and give a direct answer first. Correct major grammar and vocabulary errors (e.g., ‘wheels’ → ‘views’, verb agreement). Provide one or two specific reasons or examples to support your preference. Keep sentences simple and logical.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country. I was born in China, which is very large and has many different landscapes and cultures, so I can see a wide variety of scenery without traveling abroad.

× 'Rural is more quieter and less crowded and like the people, is friendly, friendlier and kinder under the green spaces.'

✓ 'Rural areas are quieter and less crowded, and the people are friendlier and kinder with more green spaces.'

'Rural' is a noun/adjective but here you refer to 'rural areas' (plural), so the verb must agree: use 'are' not 'is'. 'More quieter' is incorrect because 'quieter' already expresses comparative; do not add 'more'. The phrase 'like the people, is friendly' is ungrammatical and unclear; it should be 'and the people are friendlier and kinder'. Also replace 'under the green spaces' with 'with more green spaces' for clarity. Suggestion: Use correct plural subject ('rural areas') and match the verb ('are'); avoid redundant comparatives like 'more quieter'; restructure the clause about people to use 'the people are friendlier and kinder with more green spaces.'

× 'I prefer wheels in my own country.'

✓ 'I prefer views in my own country.'

'Wheels' is unrelated and likely a mischoice for 'views'. The noun should be plural 'views' if referring to different scenes. Suggestion: Use the correct lexical item 'views' to match the context about scenery.'

× 'I was born in China and the China is a big country that have many different cultures.'

✓ 'I was born in China, and China is a big country that has many different cultures.'

Do not use the definite article 'the' before country names like 'China'. Use 'China' alone. Also subject-verb agreement: 'country' (singular) requires 'has' not 'have'. Suggestion: Remove 'the' and use 'has' to agree with the singular noun.'

× 'How many different views so many people are until.'

✓ 'There are so many different views and so many people.'

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Use a clear structure: start with 'There are' to introduce existence, and separate the two ideas with 'and'. If the intended meaning is 'where there are many views, there are also many people', a clearer sentence is 'Where there are many different views, there are also many people.' Suggestion: Rearrange to a standard English clause with a subject and verb (for example, 'There are so many different views and so many people' or the conditional form above).