Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 文法と語彙の正確さを向上させ、意味が曖昧な語や誤用を直してください。具体的には、主語と動詞の一致（"architecture often affects"）、誤った語の使用（"braces"→"features"や"facets"など）、冠詞の使い方に注意しましょう。また、文をもう少し簡潔にして冗長性を減らし、話が自然に流れるよう接続詞を整えてください。発音や流暢さの改善のために、短い練習用フレーズを繰り返すことも有効です。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy photographing interesting buildings when I travel because their architecture often reflects local history and atmosphere. For example, I like taking pictures of old churches and colorful market halls because those features really show the character of a city.

Gợi ý: 文法ミスと不自然な表現を直しましょう。"if I had say"は誤りで、意見を述べる際は"if I had to choose"や"I'd say"が適切です。"People's Daily lives"は不自然なので"people's daily lives"と小文字にし、"the city atmosphere is more likely"の部分は意味が不明瞭です。理由を明確に述べ、接続詞（"because"の後）の内容を具体的に補強してください。

Ví dụ: I like both, but if I had to choose, I'd prefer urban views slightly more because you can observe people's daily lives and the lively city atmosphere gives you more photo opportunities.

Gợi ý: 語彙の誤用と文法を改善してください。"conforming"は不適切で、ここでは"comfortable"や"familiar"だけで十分です。"I liked for giving views"は意味不明なので、昔の好みを表す場合は"I used to prefer views abroad"や"I enjoyed seeing new places"など正しい表現に直しましょう。比較の理由は具体的な例（家族、風景の思い出など）を加えると良いです。

Ví dụ: Nowadays I prefer the scenery in my own country because it's familiar and I know the best spots. When I was younger, I enjoyed views in other countries more because everything felt fresh and exciting and I loved discovering new places.

× I especially enjoy taking pictures of interesting buildings when I travel because their architecture often affect the local history and atmosphere.

✓ I especially enjoy taking pictures of interesting buildings when I travel because their architecture often affects the local history and atmosphere.

The subject 'architecture' is singular and requires the third person singular verb form 'affects'. Use consistent subject-verb agreement: change 'affect' to 'affects'. Suggestion: Identify the subject (architecture) and apply third person singular '-s' in present simple. Grammar problem type ID: 27

× For example, I like photographing old churches and the colorful market halls because those braces show a city.

✓ For example, I like photographing old churches and colorful market halls because those buildings reveal the character of a city.

The word 'braces' is incorrect in this context; 'buildings' fits the meaning. 'Show a city' is awkward; use verbs like 'reveal' and noun phrase 'the character of a city' for clarity. Also remove the unnecessary definite article before 'colorful market halls'. Suggestion: Choose nouns that match intended meaning and rephrase to express 'representing the city's character'. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I like both, but if I had say, I prefer urban views a little more than rural areas because we can get a better sense of People's Daily lives and the city atmosphere is more likely.

✓ I like both, but if I had to choose, I would prefer urban views a little more than rural ones because we can get a better sense of people's daily lives and of the city atmosphere.

The phrase 'if I had say' is ungrammatical; the correct conditional expression is 'if I had to choose'. When expressing preference in a hypothetical choice, use 'would prefer'. 'Rural areas' should be parallel to 'urban views'—use 'rural ones' or 'rural areas'. 'People's Daily lives' mistakenly capitalizes and combines a newspaper name; correct form is 'people's daily lives'. 'The city atmosphere is more likely' is incomplete and unclear; rephrase to 'and of the city atmosphere' to complete the idea. Suggestion: Use proper conditional structure 'if I had to choose' and 'would prefer', ensure parallel noun forms, and keep capitalization consistent. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Now I prefer the scenery in my own country more than in other countries because it's familiar and conforming.

✓ Now I prefer the scenery in my own country to that in other countries because it's familiar and comforting.

Use the comparative structure 'prefer A to B' rather than 'prefer A more than B'. 'Conforming' is the wrong adjective here; likely intended 'comforting' or 'familiar'. Also make 'that' refer to 'the scenery' in other countries for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'prefer A to B' and choose an adjective that conveys the intended meaning (e.g. 'comforting' or 'familiar'). Grammar problem type ID: 26

× When I was young, I liked for giving views because everything seemed fresh and exciting.

✓ When I was young, I liked seeing views because everything seemed fresh and exciting.

The verb 'like' should be followed by a gerund (seeing), not the preposition 'for' plus a verb. 'Giving views' is incorrect in meaning; likely intended 'seeing views' or 'looking at views'. Use 'seeing' to indicate experiencing views. Suggestion: Use verb + -ing after 'liked' and choose the correct verb to express 'looking at' or 'viewing' (e.g. 'seeing', 'looking at'). Grammar problem type ID: 8